This is a good plot! I love the story great job!

I keep on getting confused as to whether Virgil or John are the middle child. It seems to differ from writer to writer. But for this particular story having Virgil as the middle child seemed to work perfectly. I really liked the story line, very nice. You should make a sequel of when Mark gets his "revenge".

I think this is a great story. i love to see the boys as kids and this story was excellent. i hope to see more like it!

great story. bit of a rushed last chapter but still great

You got inside Virgil's head very well here - as a 'middle' myself I could identify with him . And you did get the ages right if you assume that on the opening credits the boys are shown in birth order - and what other reason could there be for that particular sequence?

As to the smoking, well watch any 1960s tv and you will see the heroes smoking. You wonder what on todays' programes (mobile phones, petrol driven cars?) will make viewers wince in 30/40 years time

I liked this! Only problem I had was that John's the middle brother, not Virgil, but I enjoyed it none the less. Scott was very believable and I could see the rest of them equally well so well done!

A nice little story. I only wish the makers of Thunderbirds had read it before they made the show and had most of the characters lighting up. It's the only part of the show that I don't like. (That and the occasionally sexism.)

Hey, nothing's wrong with a cheesy ending, especially when the story is this good. Always nice to read a fanfic about the 'young Tracy's' and about Virgil in particular.

awww i LOVE this story. I love reading about the Tracy's being kids. "sighs dreamily"