I love ArchieOC fics... this is god.

These little character studies are great. I really enjoyed reading them. Thank you for sharing these "forgotten" characters with us.

Yeah Greg's chapter! awsome chapter!:)

This is possibly one of the best of these- Catherine sure needs to take a good look at how she's been acting to everyone lately, especially, as you mentioned, Sara. Jeez, lay off the woman, would ya Cath? Once again, I would so love for this to happen in canon. Re-evaluate your life...
I think I need to go to sleep. Way too much getting into the characters' lives, haha. THEY'RE REAL PEOPLE I SWEAR. O_O

Ugh The Evil that was Hank. He should... go away. Forever. Though I think he has. Sucks for Sara though, and you really gave a lot of insight into that aspect of her relationship with guys.
Boys are stupid. Let's throw rocks at them.
Heehee, I have a button that says that.
Warrick could work though... hm... t'would be cute, though I'm more of a YoBling girl myself. ;)

Nicky is too cute. Gotta love him. And psshh, Catherine's messed up how many times? Yeesh. Shouldn't make poor Nick out to be the fool, yet he does. >_< Good for him to be right some of the time. :D

Ach, poor Ecklie. ;D
"If I ruled the world, that look would be the first thing to go. Well, that and celery. I really dislike celery…"
xD Dorks rule. :p
By the way, I'm absolutely loving the way you present each character- self-contemplation and then a bit of interaction with another character- it's really very effective getting the character of each... character... across. Hehe, if that made any sense. ^^;;

"That’s even sexier than a CSI."
Bwahahahaha. xD Way too funny. And so great! Poor Archie though, cooped up in his lab. I could so see the A/V guy getting that rep... would suck.

Aw, Brass! He's such a softie deep down. "Ellie" is one of my favorite episodes, just because Brass is so great in it. And this is quite awesome, just because.

"But I still think Grissom is an idiot."
xD Love it. Awesome delve into Ecklie's mind, too. Gives answers to why he is who he is... very well characterized.

EXCELLENT chapter!
Ok, the Grissom & Sara re compatible bit was a bit scary, but you captured Catherine's personality perfectly.
Well done :D

Okay, how what should I start with. To be perfectly honest, in my mind, there is nothing wrong with this story whatsoever. You have captured their personalities flawlessly, and you can tell who is thinking it even before the story tells you. They act how they would on the show, and you can only smile at the characters little quirks and stuff. You are an accomplished writer and desrve to be reognized on more then just Fanfiction.net. Try writing some original work and sending it into a publisher. Good job.

Hey, great musings. Will there be more for Catherine, Grissom and Warrick?

This is great. Man, your characterization is simply flawless. Really enjoying your insights into our favorite characters. More!

this is really good, i like how you started with the characters that don't get very much credit. good work :)