 harriep 2007-09-07 . chapter 2Please, Please update soon!! |
 Irihi Safaia 2003-02-18 . chapter 2*giggles* go Lucius. more please? |
 Inherent Contradictions 2003-02-05 . chapter 2Oooh . . . intriguing! I always throught the Diggorys were far too nice about the whole 'their son being killed thing'. Of course, Mrs Diggory does appear to be going rather overboard in the other direction now . . . |
 The Great Haboob 2003-02-05 . chapter 2THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORYS I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!! IT ROX!!! CONTINUE |
 Skull Bearer 2003-01-31 . chapter 1Damn, I knew there was a trick somewhere....you are one good writer, you know? Update this.
Skull Bearer. |
 netrat 2003-01-28 . chapter 1 ... he just wasn't parcel to being yelled at ...
I think you mean PARTIAL to being yelled at. This was the only annoying spelling error I found (in the sense that it takes the reader out of the story). If English really isn't your first language, then I think you did very well, 'cause it isn't my first language either and I know how hard it is to write in a foreign language.
I really liked the chapter - I've read quite a few Polyjuice Potion stories but a Dudley-Lucius Malfoy swap is something completely new (at least to me). I think this is a very nice set-up chapter - keep on writing, will you?
Looking forward to Snape's Evil Smirks! :-) |