Awesome. Great piece of work. ^^

Omg, that was positivley perfect. This one part moved me to tears.
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"Just stay that way a moment longer," he requested of them, and they looked up, still holding each other, "In case I never see you two again, the way you two are right now is the way I want to remember Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger for the rest of my life."

This is such a great fanfic. I'm glad Microphone told me about you!
This is so good! I loved it!
It was so cool when Harry said that Ron was his hero...
Great job.

~Spellcaster~

I agree with that Microphone person, you should write a song fic sequle (horribly spelled) You know, Harry defeating Voldermort, R and H being all worried, Harry COMING back, ALIVE! Great story thing!

*el gaspo* That was brilliant! You must continue this story!!

very different from your others. actually thought it was turning harry/ron there for a minute. '-- well anyways. it was good.

*sob* that was wonderful *blows nose* that was awsome *sob* i loved it ^_^

your story is beautiful!

i love this fic, i love the concept, i love how you captured how harry most probably feels about ron and put it to print, i love ron, i love how 'mione is very perceptive, i love that what you wrote is probabley 99-100% true, i love how you wrote it... but, did harry really have to say "...you're the wind beneath my wings..."? that was overkill... that line was to mushy for a guy to say... i mean i dont know boys but i dont think a guy would say that...

btw... ive read that old fic of yours, i dont remember which, the really long one and where 'mione's parents are attacked or something, and well you've come along way in the way of writing... or in other words, you've become better... and you can even be better... i look forward to your other fics...

cheers.
trina-k, who likes your stories a lot.

Well you are just going to make me cry :). First, that dedication was too sweet, and then this fic--so brilliant, just as I've come to expect from you.

Damn straight, he's our hero :).

Um, well you started out good, but towards the end it got a little dramatic for it to be happening between two guys. Especially Harry, he never really shows more emotion then a smile or a frown. Your writing was pretty good, but the content could use a tad of work. And watch your "he"'s and "she"'s and "her"'s

*tear* *tear* That was so GOOD! And so sweet! Keep up the good work!