I like your story, really, I do, but trying to read this gives me a headache. There are no paragraphs to this, and having eveything bunched together like that is difficult to read.

Great fic! Good job! Please update soon! ^-^

Hurry hurry with the next chappie!

M, a welcome break in the flow of below average Legolas/OC stories that flood these halls. Yours is quite good.
Just one small detail. Sometimes, the sentences run on a bit.
For example: I want you, Larawyn, to let me train you, I can train you well, at first, I thought that I was the most powerful wizard, but you are, I mean, you will be.
This could have been split into a few sentences...
But still, it's very good.

Oh...me likey...Poor Legolas keeps getting hurt...Is Lenna gonna remember her past with Legolas? Eh eh...i hope so...nicely done... bravo!

aw, good chapter. :)

please continue soon! please!

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* jumps up and down with excitment* !
MORE ANGST FOR LEGOLAS LATER :) YAY
now now now
haha...
I LOVE your story ... its so wel done :)
I am glad you are going to start explaining things abit for a chapter or few... BUT LEGOLAS ANGST! YAY :) haha
well keep up the GREAT work :)

uh...

is Marewyn good or bad? i guess she's good, but she has an odd way of showing it. :p

well, judging by your review of my fic, you already know it's done. :p i'll have the new fic up in a while, and i'll e-mail you when i do. :)

more soon!

hahahaha *laughs* oops, do ya want me to laugh? lol, *laughs ne ways* cliffy. :P funnie

VERY GOOD! I LUV IT! it would be better if u had leggo die. r u? that would be so sad! but it would be romantic as well if you had him kiss Lenna right before he died. a "good" kiss!

aw, legolas is mean!

but gimli deserved it!! :p

more soon!

aw...

nice chapter. i hope lenna will remember eventually.

more soon!

howdy :) hehehe your story has been in my favourite lists for ages ... but I havent gotten around to writting a review :) sorry about that hehe
youar story is great :) I love it :)
obviously you like legolas getting injured :) hahah well if you do I have the story for you :)
* thinks of the story * its called ' eld becomes a dwarf ' hehehe its REALLY good ... you will like it :)
the writer is' elven ice angel'... so if yo uwont a good read there you go :)
I hate flame mail... but I love helpful mail :) ... the chapters at the end are really good :) maybe the first chapter you can make more paragraphs :) since its your first page and chapter... you wont people to keep readin and so look good... but hey.. that didn't stop me from reading.. :) I LOVE IT :)
well I hope you have a lovely week :)
hope to hear from you and your writing soon :)
kobi

haha, vivster ;) u update way faster tahn i do .. ^^ contineu! lol, i want my DVD back!