You're crying and you're okay... Wow. Letting go.

Sad. Bright certainly seemed to have the hardest time of anyone adapting to Colin the Second, and this scene captured that perfectly. Nice follow-up to "Whilst this Machine".

so sad, but i loved it!

This was beautiful. The entire thing. Sorry if I'm not being very helpful.

I'm seeing a pattern here...my boys are always so sad! It makes sense though, considering their current situation, but it still hurts a little. Very well written and not cliche at all! I loved the molding/pushing line...

Wow, that is what i call good writing. And you know, it's people like you who never get reviews for it, but people with mary-sues and 57 chapter of crap get up to 208 of them...i don't think it's fair...Anyway...I'f love to read anything else you've write, because that was very rare and very well done :)

This is incredible! Your writing is so perfect and poetic, even. The second person made everything much more dramatic and added an effect I really love. This is such a poignant piece. The line about a ghost that could have been him is something I know will stick with me for a very long time. Very thought provoking, written in that classic writing style of yours. I love this. It was not cliche at all! This is probably the most original and creative story I have ever read. Please keep writing! I find myself anxiously awaiting your amazing stories.

-Ditey

wow. i am just...really impressed. wow.

I really liked this, it was thoight provoking and interesting.