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| ???? 2006-07-16 ch 5, anon. | abusehey you! get the story going or i'll not review anymore! ('course, i said that because i liked it, obviously) |
| MiZtreSZ of MaSterMiNDz 2004-08-01 ch 5, anon. | abusewhy did it have to stop why? why? it had great potential in the presiding chapters. English: It was great! hate those stupid frosted flake commercials. gr |
| Yue-neko 2004-06-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseHEY I RESENT BEING CALLED A HUMAN!**Gr** Anyway, Flames can also be used to roast marshmallows ^_^. By the way whats a mary-sue? Everyone else dosen't want to tell me Y.Y Also, Love the story but one question, if you you had your 'dack'side removed and its a guy and your a girl, what were you refore he was removed? @_@ Later, Yue-neko(but everyone calls me Yue^_^) |
| Aggelos 2003-08-06 ch 5, | abuseCOOLIES! *presses button to increase font size* *smoke starts coming out of the top of the computor* *coughs* *more smoke* *falls out of chair coughing* *more smoke* (Cool story. Update soon please. Though I might not be able to review for the next chapie.) *screen goes blank* |
| Very Evil Daughter of Lord ... 2003-07-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseInterestin story, tho im not sure of insane grandma's motives- is it coz she jus wants 2 b da most powaful fairy in da world or sumfink? ne wys, a gud story & da charactas r all in c most of da time. i like it (duh!) & plz ud8 sun.by da wy, fluff is nt a bad fing!! |
| YazzyDream 2003-07-10 ch 5, | abuseAWESOME~update soon! |
| cacter 2003-07-08 ch 5, | abuseGood story. Couple of minor mistakes, but no one's perfect. Keep up the good writing. |
| Double Oh Behave 2003-05-22 ch 4, | abuseWell, you reviewed my fics, so I thought it only right that I review yours. I found your story both mentaly and physicaly stimulating. A great read. P.S. I'm flattered you'd like to marry me, but sadly, I already have a wonderful boyfriend called Lee. Sorry... |
| Lady T 2003-04-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseToo bad you went to jail! Good story! |
| Lady T 2003-04-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseThat was good, your sister's right you are a better writer than she is! Please read and review my first fic Krazy 4 You! I have a sister to, it's ther talented and famous megu-chan, read her stories too. Satisfaction garunteed. Update soon! |
| Lady T 2003-04-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseAn old lady giving out beauty tips, strange? This one was good, but it's still eating me up that I have no idea how these people look! |
| Lady T 2003-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the story, I just don't know who these people are. Never heard of them in my whole life. Your sister told me to look at your story, so I did! I'm too lazy to log in. |
| Beware Of Blonde007 2003-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, I too agree (quite unfortunately) with the *glances with loathing* big... *waves hand* blubbery... thing... *Walrus cracks knuckles* ... WITH TUSKS... *ahem* *sheepish grin* neway, this is a good fic, but (I never quite got which name 2 use so I'm callin' her Chimeara) Chimeara is kinda a MarySue. But good plot and well writen! ^_^ overall an ok fic! =D ~Hanna* |
| Big Friendly Walrus 2003-03-23 ch 4, | abuseNo, this is a Mary Sue. If you need proof e-mail me. But it is. |
| A. S. Snickers 2003-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI'm going to have to agree with the large, happy, aquatic mammal on this one. If Mary-Sueness was measured in waffle batter, you'd have yourself one rather large waffle. |