 unknown 2006-10-01 . chapter 3 this story is coming alonge up date soon |
 zimmergage 2003-05-26 . chapter 3 I really like you story hope you update soon |
 qminster 2003-04-04 . chapter 3 go kristina perry's method if have confidence in yourself. People are willing to help each other especially those they think shine brightly. |
 qminster 2003-04-04 . chapter 3 go kristina perry's method if have confidence in yourself. People are willing to help each other especially those they think shine brightly. |
 Kuroi Koneko 2003-02-04 . chapter 3 Hey! Don't worry about it, just as long as you keep writing the best you can!
~Kuroi |
 Dracos 2003-02-03 . chapter 2 Yah! A another chapter. My vote for Ranma and Usagi's mother would be Jubilee. One, she is oriental and another is, because of her mutant powers, she has blue eyes. Or another is Emma Frost (aka White Queen). She has the white-blonde hair and her secondary mutant powers is diamond hard skin (which could explain how Ranma can get malleted with Akane's mallet and pop up a few seconds later without much damage. Those are two possible choices.
I wait for more future chapters. |
 Sammie 2003-02-02 . chapter 2 This is interesting. So they are friends now. I like this so far. Sorry about updating twice last time, I thought the first one didn't go through because my computer froze right after I sent it. |
 Final-Fan 2003-02-02 . chapter 2 Well, speaking for myself I'm not a big fan of the "let's give Ranma/whoever superpowers from another series and/or make them relatives of people from other series" storylines, but it's not too bad for that kind of thing.
You might want to work on spelling, grammar, and general writing, though. The writing seems, to me, to be skimpy on details.
But I suppose that if no one else cares, you might as well ignore me, because I'm probably not going to keep reading this. (Please don't be offended, this just doesn't look like it's going to interest me.) |
 mmoon 2003-02-02 . chapter 2 hey try storm for there mom |
 Kuroi Koneko 2003-02-02 . chapter 2Hey, another update!! You've just made my month! Good chapter, that spell check thing helped. So Ran-chan, Usa-chan, and Spidey are gonna meet, huh? Interesting.
Well, it's nice that this was a longer chapter. It was a pleasant surprise.
~Kuroi
P.S. - is this gonna be a combined storyline between the different shows or a new storyline that uses the (main) characters rather than the storylines? I meant to ask that earlier. |
 CyberAngelOne 2003-02-01 . chapter 2a bit short hope that mean you are going to update often |
 Kuroi Koneko 2003-01-30 . chapter 1YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!! A new addition!!! *jumps up and down for joy* YEAH!!!!!
Well, I'm glad all my nagging got somewhere, and thanks for the note at the top!
Interesting, Spiderman's the resident hero eh? Short but sweet, and there are quite a few interesting elements in here. I can't wait to see what you're gonna add next!
~Kuroi
P.S. - So how's Spiderman gonna react to this "truce"? |
 Dracos 2003-01-30 . chapter 1 The summary got my attention, now who could Ranma and Usagi's father be? So I read the story. So far, it seems like an interesting plot. But I still don't know which of the mutants could be their father. A co-worker said that there are only two people who have 'claws' and that adamantium skeleton (either Logan or Sabertooth). I thought it could possibly be both. Ranma getting Logan's hair color and Usagi getting Sabertooth's blondish hair color. But that is only a theory. I can not wait to read who it ends up being. Keep up the work. |
 Sammie 2003-01-29 . chapter 1 Their father is Wolverine! Right?! I personal don't really have a probablem with the spelling, I am actually enjoying this. You are off to a good start. Update soon, I look forward to reading the next chapter! |
 Sammie 2003-01-29 . chapter 1 I didn't really have a problem with the spelling, I actually didn't really notice because i wasn't trying to correct it, just enjoy it. I think that you are off to a good start, and look forward to your next update. |