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Reviews for: The magical vortex my version
GrungeGiRL
2003-03-18 . chapter 1
Hi! U know who I am, don'tcha? Anyway, this is a good first attempt. Hope you continue!

See ya soon (if I invite you round to my place! *lol*)

PS: Ya know, if you make more fics, the more reviews you get.
TopazSoarhire
2003-01-31 . chapter 1
Paragraphing would help tremendously. More description of the emotions. I reaaaaaly want to know which senshi she will be, but I guess its Rainbow huh?
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