   heather-marie 2004-09-18 . chapter 4hey this is really cool. it looks like it hasnt been updated in a while, i wish you would,
Heather |
 Pearl 2004-07-11 . chapter 4 Looks around grins orders another chapter with a side of fluff and whates this about Numair resigning if he resighened I will take him lol update soon.
P.S ok love the story update as soon as posible |
| Diamond Sylvan 2004-06-28 . chapter 1 Hey, coming from a Tamora Pierce addict..I love it! This is awsome, also it's the first Tamora Pierce story I've read, and it's rly good. As soon as I finish I'm gonna go read Two Alannas, I promise...
~Jules |
| Black Mage 91 2004-06-16 . chapter 4 Awesome story. keep it up. it's fair funny with the whipped cream and the window and the animals. i think you get my point. hurry up and update |
| CopperCurls1 2004-02-25 . chapter 4 oi wot!
hehe
carry on but u stil being weird
lol
but our fic together is betta |
| moon-starx 2004-02-19 . chapter 4 No it does not count as soon!! heehee kitten ate Numair. v. funny. Update SOON this time.
moon-starx |
| BlueEpiks13 2004-02-17 . chapter 4 o great fic so far...one question though...Numy??!! where did you come up with THAT nickname lol... |
| kitten who polays with daggers 2004-02-15 . chapter 4 this is good for your first"fluffy " fan fic
it is a little strange but then arne't we al alitte strange this is great i WANT MORE if you don't write ajother chapter i think i come find you and eat you |
| horseluver 2004-02-13 . chapter 4 m... interesting
but i wouldnt want to be immortal , i would nit want to have to see my friends die.
also, it could get tiring! imagine being stuck here FOREVER! i would want to see what lay beyond this world. anyway, if daine and numair do find immortality, wouldnt everyone want it then? how could they stop the entire race of humans becoming immortal? |
| horseluver 2004-02-13 . chapter 2 EW! numair treats daine like she's his daughter!
only aly calls numair numy!
that just creeps me out!
i luv daine and numair and all that, but in this story they r just way too out of character.
oh well, this is a mildly interesting story so ill keep reading.
if daine was in the dark gods realms, could'nt her parents visit her being that they're gods ??
does anyone know if that is possible?
well if i were daine id go with numy!:) |
| rora the wise 2004-02-13 . chapter 4 pretty darn good! love kit's mood. update soon! please? *sobs* |
| DarkFlame1289 2004-02-12 . chapter 4 YEY! fun chapter! hahaha, John had some issues didnt he? i love kitten! very good, its not that short so stop whining dear. love! |
| Night child 2003-12-27 . chapter 3 LOVE THE STORY. PLEASE UP LOAD SOON. |
| CopperCurls1 2003-11-04 . chapter 3 hah! ur bein' immature!
update sn. |
| moon-starx 2003-11-04 . chapter 3 No this does not count as soon!! Cool anyway this is a good chapter. UPDATE SON!
moon-starx |
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