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movieholic 7/23/08 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so sweet. I especially love these lines:

"Because I wanted to. Because you're beautiful. Because if I am gonna die, then I want to spend my last day doing some of the things I've dreamed about for a long time, and that's definitely in the top five."

"What can I say to something like that?"

"You could ask what the other four are," he joked.

Another brilliant one from you, you're an awesome writer. Hope that didn't sound as cheesy as it looks.
K. H. T 3/15/02 . chapter 1
hahahaha, good ending! this is really good!
Lindsay King Sam 7/31/00 . chapter 1
Heya, Beth, I absolutely LOVED this! What a wonderful twist in the middle of it with the virus!

Just thought I'd let you know!

See ya in the land of Profiler (just kidding), byebyes!

Lindsay
maryann 6/12/00 . chapter 1
I suppose Jack's plan failed utterly! :)
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