Based on marvelously improbable assumptions (Belldandy dies, Keiichi ascends to heaven) you have constructed a compelling story of sadness and angst. I must keep reading even though I prefer happy, feel-good stories (that's why I'm a fan of AMG).

However, I do wish your scenes were delimited a bit better. You have dialog taking place in different locations and times abutting with no separators. This slows down the reader and jars him out of the story until he can decode the scene break and deduce where he is now. This is very unkind to your readers. Even an extra blank line would be preferable.

An author has to work hard so that the reader has an easy time...
Mike

Kalus,
I have just finshed rereading Make My Dreams Come True. The first time I read this I was a newlywed liveing in bliss. The words rang true and clear. I could see what Belldandy was feeling and mourn right along with Keiichi. Now five years latter I am going through a divorce and I can see the other side of the coin. You have put into words what I could not say, did not have the words to say. I again feel like Belldandy, unable to let go. But I also feel like Keiichi, I have the need to move on. Just because you move on does not mear that you're love was not real or has stoped, It just means that you have learned to love again.

Bravo,
watchdog210

This was a rare find indeed. An expertly balanced mix of bitter and sweet, with just enough payoff at the end to give the adept reader a little smile. I give it my highest praise - this is writing people pay money for.

I have never read such a excellent story. I was on pins and needles wanting to find out on what transpired next. I also like how this seemed to follow sometime after the ah my goddess movie which was a nice touch. Great job.

Nice story, kind feel Skuld and some the others could played a slightly larger role, but oh well. You just can't be a Bell in this story. Marring Kei at such a young age and expecting him to live in misery for rest his life while she waits in paradise? Hehe.. so evil. I think the worst part of it all, heaven messing with Morgan and Kei. Life is short, so why keep wasting theirs with stupid mind wipes hehe. Ah well, despite some sad elments, some supper sweet waffy elements.. overall I like this story. Not many have the guts to put Bell in a less then perfect light.

...cried when I read this chapter. I haven't cried by reading a fanfic in a very, very long time.

I didn't expect a story such as this one to make me cry.

Very nice! Words can not describe how I feel about this awesome fic... :P

Aweome! A complex, somber tale with considerable psychological inight and profundity.

If I have any complaint, it's that it is not true to the authentic spirit of Fujisima's work - lighthearted and loving, gentle and mild.

Mike

Good fanfic.

I could easily say this would be one of the top dramas of an A!MG Fanfic.

Wow, I found this phenomenal story once again! Let me pop some corn and put some mood music on in the background. One of the better tear-jerkers if I recall the last time I read it, another i.d. ago. Thanks for keeping this fic where I could find it.
Regards.
W.

Oh wow, I Just really loved this story,its so beautifu and mystic at the samed time!Please keep writing stories like this!ok luvyabuhbye^-^

Darn it, you nearly made me cry.
~YK

You have just written the most coolest story ever in fanfiction! I sincerely commend your story for being the best ever!
One thing about your story, though, (I've read to about the 2nd chapter), but I don't know why, the expression in some parts is a bit unexpected, a bit inaccurate and a little out of place e.g. the capital lettering of some parts of the character's speeches,where perhaps less capital lettering would be needed.
But seriously, your story is totally out of this world! I have never read a better story at Fanfiction.com or anywhere else in the world! Your stuff ranks with Eoin Cooper's stuff!

Oh, before I forget. I love the brief interaction between Morgan and Keiichi at the end. Its a time without drama, without deep phychological issues, its just about 2 people interacting. Its fun and a nice reprieve from the heavy emotions typically projected between the 2.

I loved the twist in the last chapter. A fine conclusion to a great story. Still...
It leaves the possibility of a sequel in the works. Is that possibility? Or is the reader left to imagine the future on their own?