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| Achalon 2008-05-12 ch 6, | abuseThis is one of the best stories ever. It's both a serious story, and at the same time funny as hell. Great combination, you don't see it very often these days. Really hope you pick this story back up sometime soon. - Josh. |
| tdk99992000 2006-10-30 ch 6, | abusecool |
| FairyQilan 2006-06-26 ch 6, | abuseGreat story. |
| WBH21C 2005-08-21 ch 6, | abuseSWEET! Very well done! |
| dogbertcarroll 2005-06-27 ch 6, | abuseExcellent work. |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-01-07 ch 5, | abuseQuite good I like this one. |
| Bander King 2004-03-13 ch 5, | abuseFinally! Buffy and Xander are together! I only wish Joss went with this way on his show. Buffy and Xander would be perfect together. |
| Mountain William 2003-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOK, your stuff is interesting, so far. But for someone who makes such a bald and arrogantly egotistical statement about proper writing and editing in his profile, you really need to learn the difference between the contraction of "you" and "are" (which is spelled "you're") and the second person possesive pronoun (which is spelled "your"). Oh, wait! Maybe it is a little trickier than you thought! Give it another shot. |
| Canis Black 2003-03-31 ch 4, | abuseI really need to watch some of the Monty Python stuff. I did catch one episode of Red Dwarf on PBS once, but that's the only one I've seen. Oh well, it was still a funny story. |
| Canis Black 2003-03-31 ch 1, | abuseProcrastination ROCKS! Especially when I find stories like this to help me procrastinate. The whole playboy mansion thing was funny and the bit about the explanation of the nature of existence starting with a monkey was great too. (Even if I think I've heard something about it before...but ah well.) |
| Layce74 2003-03-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseWeird is good, and so is the story. Please continue. |
| Blackguard 2003-03-26 ch 3, | abusePLEAE UPDATE SOON! |
| Layce74 2003-03-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseCOOL COOL Please write more |
| Jewel 2003-03-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseVery good; I'm enjoying it hugely... don't stop! Would like to see longer chapters. |
| Jane McCartney 2003-01-30 ch 2, | abuseQuick chapter? I think it could be longer. This story keeps getting funnier and funnier; I just love it. And please, PLEASE, do not ever again tell Alexander and Anna go well together: my best friend's name's Anna, and my boyfriend's Alexandre, what's, duh, a variation of Alexander. Anyways, personal lives aside, please you can keep the chapters coming! (With all the, well, Buffy and Xander five, and I think six at last scenes, uh, together, I don't think coming is the most polite word to use right now) |