I think this story was written with an extra chromosone...

THAT WAS SO CRUEL! THIS IS SO HORRIBLE! I DON'T THINK LINEAR DESERVED THAT!

Uh...O.K. I think that was kind of depressing and questionable. Questionable meaning I don't think I got the whole point of that other than Mag forcing Linear to do something that I prefer not to go into. I'd write more on why Mag becomes who he is in the story. Not a bad start though.

Yeah! That's it! Kill Linear! God, I hate Linear.

Good fic. I love it when people do this to a character I hate.

That was very... very... special.

Mag is so mean...

o_0 *fanits*

meh. it needs another chapter before I hate it. :P

I don't know WHY people flamed this. It's an example of someone getting their ideas out in the open.
Not to be mean, but you arne't the greatest writer, but even if it was evil, I DID like the idea.
DON'T DO DRUGS MAG! XDXDXD *dies*

That was pitiful. If this is your sick, demented way of getting reviews, I laugh at you. At least I don't do that. Were the characters on drugs or something? That was so terrible, I seriously do not adore you. I hated it. And I don't know why you did that to Linear. I don't like you at all...

uh...err...that was sorta freaky. ...but I like the blood. .;

What a weird story. Did Mag go crazy or something? Maybe he's on drugs? But it is different, scary and therefore interesting. Crazy too.

Good for linear. i dont like her anyway... tho that was a bit weird tho

OMG! HOW COULD YOU! Well i dont flame people because i dont think thats proper. How could u write something like that about Linear? She's so cute! Well i'm not going to lie to you and say that i like ur fic because i didnt, but i'm not going to flame you for it either. I didnt like your story and if you could please take it out! Linear doesnt deserve that!

Oh my god, you sick bastard. That was horrible. Take it down and you will be spared eternal flames by me.