I LOVE IT! That was definatly Sqe material!

Good Job! :D Hope update!!

~KawaiiKisa~

That was funny...Ja Ja!
But I think that thing with the motorcycle was too much.
I just love the couple UmiCleff!! Write more about them!

I FRIKKIN LOVE IT!

This is whitout doubt THE best MKR fic i have ever read, And as a the HUGE Umi/Clef fan that i am it's nice too see someone finally writing a PROPER U/C fic.

For it would seem that 8/10 authors always seem to forget when they write a U/C fic that Clef is WAY shorter than Umi
(If you count out his OVA form) and they seem to forget that he would have a great deal of trouble to "take her in his arms" when he barley is reaching up to her hips.

I REALLY liked the way you made Umi the more dominant one, and how she always scoops him up in her arms, it's just so adorable.

Keep up the great work, reading your fic was a true pleasure.

more more more more! thank you

i really like ur story...

Keep writing! Me and OCs root for you *japanese fans*

It was a lovely story and i like your style of writing. Keep it up!Oh and i absolutely love umi/clef.

O.

Hi!

I think you have a very good story. Please continue it. I like it really i think it is ne of the best i´ve even read.

x.x That was sweet...AND THAT TOOK LONG TO UPDATE! -_-; Too bad your not continuing it. There aren't a lot of Clef/Umi's around...

Wai~! ^^ I'm SO glad you decided to make another chapter to this fic!! I love it! Great job! ^_^ *runs off to add fic to her fave list*

That is so adorable! I absolutely love this fic! Clef/Umi is my fave pairing! I can't wait to read more of your MKR Fluff Fics. GL! ;P

loved it! that was so sweet... continue please...?

Aw! How sweet! I agree with another reviewer: you did make Clef's short form work well! I also thought that extra detail about Clef's...er...condition was also interesting. ;) I don't think I've read that in a fanfic before! ;) Again: that story was GREAT! Keep it up!