 Ronadell 2003-03-21 . chapter 1 Is it a Killua x Kurapika, Leorio x Kurapika or both? I like it, please continue writing! I really want to know what will happen next. PLease?! |
 domineko 2003-03-01 . chapter 1well, hi! I heard that you had a ff.net account so I came here to look for ya. ^-^ just wanna check out some of your fics. ^-^ This story's particularly good (it's really poetic ^-^ and sweet) but i think it kinda lacks narration. Anyway, keep on writing (you'll soon get the hang of it ^-^) and good luck!
By the way, would you mind reviewing my fics? It's ok if you don't, I'll just keep a close watch on yours. ^-^ |
 Kaldea 2003-02-01 . chapter 1 Flame you? Ofcourse not, This fic is great! I really really liked it, please make more! |
 Lady Zephyros 2003-01-29 . chapter 1Hiya......Daisy-Chan.....another fic from you ^___^ MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ^______^! |
 DP-san 2003-01-29 . chapter 1...Might as well call this a repeation of the song.
Put in more narration between the lyrics, and next time, have something separating the lyrics from the actual fic.
MORE. NARRATION.
~Wusai |
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