|Reviews for Consummation|
| Krystalmage 5/21/11 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
| the.stories.live.on 5/18/10 . chapter 1
Wow. That was just, wow.
I really liked it.
I liked the way you portrayed both the characters.
| Warg 8/8/06 . chapter 1
I am, for once, speechless.
I would add that this has been an amazing and unique read. An insightful delve into Tomoe's mind using an action and its reaction to draw a scene both vivid and disjointed, flashes of thought sewn into lucid scenes.
| Guest 2/22/06 . chapter 1
They did sleep in the smae futon. Or at least, in the manga, the day before Tomoe was captured they were.
| cutie 2/22/06 . chapter 1
''Together, only in love. Only in love..."
was truly touching
| Summoner Lenne10 11/20/05 . chapter 1
Wow... this is great. I should read more Tomoe stories, I love her, wow, this is amazing...
Truly remarkable, wow.
| Aura Black Chan 6/22/04 . chapter 1
I loved this! What a sweet story!
| TanukiGirl22 6/17/04 . chapter 1
i read this one in TFME but couldn't figure out how the reviewing thing worked. i'm glad i got to read it again and hope to read more
| Cassidy J 2/3/04 . chapter 1
Ah, very nice _ I love how you portrayed Tomoe's thoughts. Such a difficult character to grasp...
| Snowfall 1/29/04 . chapter 1
I don't usually write reviews for fanfics I read, though maybe I should. However, after reading your story, I just had this feeling that I'd like you to know I liked it. Very much. There's really nothing more that needs to be said.
But I'll still say more. I haven't seen the whole series yet, but I've seen the first 4 OVA series and the movie, and I think Kenshin ja Tomoe were a great couple. And your story describes Tomoe's thoughts so beautifully, I...I had tears in my eyes when I finished. But I've always been very sensitive.
Anyway, I think people should know when they're doing good job. And to hear it from others too.
I enjoyed the story.
| icemint 7/28/03 . chapter 2
hillo I read your companion piece before I read this one, but anyhow, I loved it just as much. )
| hpdigigal 5/30/03 . chapter 1
Hmm. Intersting. But can you make a story on Tomoe's thoughts when she tells Kenshin her story about her life? Pwease? Pwease?
| six keys 3/26/03 . chapter 2
wow, this is very beautiful! lovely! wonderful! i really like the way you took it actually from Tomoe's POV. there arent a lot of stories out there that focus on her.
anyways, very nice. Keep up the good work!
| tatsumaki 3/14/03 . chapter 2
You're entering the fanfiction contest at Anime North? Awesome! I'm going to that con too! Good luck with your fic!
| Akari Sennyami 3/14/03 . chapter 1
As many reviewers before me have said, this piece begs for a Kenshin POV counterpoint. It would really set off the points being made in this fic. The ideas are approached in a way that felt natural to Tomoe as a character- not many fic writers get the characters just right like that.
In other words- v good story. *grin*