I am, for once, speechless.

I would add that this has been an amazing and unique read. An insightful delve into Tomoe's mind using an action and its reaction to draw a scene both vivid and disjointed, flashes of thought sewn into lucid scenes.

Awesome read.

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They did sleep in the smae futon. Or at least, in the manga, the day before Tomoe was captured they were.

''Together, only in love. Only in love..."

was truly touching

Wow... this is great. I should read more Tomoe stories, I love her, wow, this is amazing...

Truly remarkable, wow.

I loved this! What a sweet story!

i read this one in TFME but couldn't figure out how the reviewing thing worked. i'm glad i got to read it again and hope to read more

Ah, very nice ^_^ I love how you portrayed Tomoe's thoughts. Such a difficult character to grasp...

I don't usually write reviews for fanfics I read, though maybe I should. However, after reading your story, I just had this feeling that I'd like you to know I liked it. Very much. There's really nothing more that needs to be said.
But I'll still say more. I haven't seen the whole series yet, but I've seen the first 4 OVA series and the movie, and I think Kenshin ja Tomoe were a great couple. And your story describes Tomoe's thoughts so beautifully, I...I had tears in my eyes when I finished. But I've always been very sensitive.
Anyway, I think people should know when they're doing good job. And to hear it from others too.
I enjoyed the story.

hillo ^^ I read your companion piece before I read this one, but anyhow, I loved it just as much. =)

Hmm. Intersting. But can you make a story on Tomoe's thoughts when she tells Kenshin her story about her life? Pwease? Pwease?

wow, this is very beautiful! lovely! wonderful!! i really like the way you took it actually from Tomoe's POV. there arent a lot of stories out there that focus on her.
anyways, very nice. Keep up the good work!

You're entering the fanfiction contest at Anime North? Awesome! I'm going to that con too! Good luck with your fic!

As many reviewers before me have said, this piece begs for a Kenshin POV counterpoint. It would really set off the points being made in this fic. The ideas are approached in a way that felt natural to Tomoe as a character- not many fic writers get the characters just right like that.

In other words- v good story. *grin*

Hmm...I just noticed this fic ^^ And I love it ^^ Can't wait for the second one!

Nice and sweet. Good luck on the competition!

EK 8 )