cool first chapter, keep up the good work

interesting story

played out well-liked the reference to the crime fighting work of america's guyver.So is this one sean barker?

one criticism though-the part before the 50 vampires where buffy says o ** and faith says thas that i thought youd say-the speakers should be switched around-with the crude oh ** coming from faith and the sarcastic and arrogant comment of thtas what i thought youd say coming from buffy.

none the less good work-looking forward to more.

hey this is pretty cool i hope you decide to continue it. it seems very thought out.

Hey It's me again! Please continue this fic. Does Buffy meet the guyver? Does she find out who he is? Please Please Please continue. I'll be waiting. Continue it today.

Hey TrunksssKama! The drug dealers weren't tied up, idiot! the Guyver killed them all, but not before the bad guys killed the security guard! get the facts straight!

Great storyline. Love setting, the team up and the plot.Keep up the good work.

Hey This is cool. Are you continueing it? Is Buffy going to find out who the Guyver is? and Is this occuring when Faith has already turned to the dark side? Also I like how you brought in the beginning to the second movie of the Guyver into this. Keep writing!

I am looking forward to the rest of the story I hope it continues to pique everyones interest

Short but cool. Some developing on deatisl could be good, but overall this sounds like a lot of fun and I hope to read more!

i like this idea in general... but i think your kinda rushing trough this first chapter... in my opinion the story should slow down a little and given time to develop at a steady pace.. i think that would do a lot of good... aside from that i like it a lot... love to see more soon

good 9/10 keep up the good work

This is a very short, yet interesting fic. I like the idea of crossing Guyver with the Buffy series. It does need more action, but otherwise it was good.

This is good and I have a feeling I know who the Guyver is so please finish it so I can be sure.

Hey man, this story ain't bad, a good cross over. i could use more detail but a sweet story none the less. lookin forward to the sequel.

Possible change to the story would be the Buffy team retreating into a warehouse, trying to set up a defense line against the vampires. After a few minutes, they hear a fight going on outside, and then a cuple vampires run into the warehouse, trying to hide.
Buffy & co. never see Guyver, and are left wondering what just happened.