Read it by mistake. I thought it was a crossover of Buffy and McGuyver. Oops! Interesting though, it's a bit like her first meeting with Angel. Who are you? A friend.
Wonder if Buffy get together with him. I haven't a clue who Guyver is, but you may have guessed that already.

cool story i want to see what happnes.

This is good and I have a feeling that I know who the Guyver is.

ooooo it's very good and interesting! I like the crossover but I'd like more Xander please :) (Xander's my fav. character) you _have_ to write more this is a cool story :)

have you got a spellcheck on your computer???
apart from that it is good!!!
we really enjoyed taking a part each in your story, also i would suggest a slightly longer story with more from xander.

Very cool.Guyver is the-alien hero-man!Write more.

MORE ! I love that moviue! Both of them!