I hope you dont mind critisism if you do then TOTALLY Ignore this I wont be rude, I assure you just going to point a few things

First you cant apparate at all in Hogwarts thats why they said in HBP that they could apparate in the hall but there was a tiem limit before they wouldn't be able to apparate again.

Second its impossible to learn how to apparate at twelve its in one of the chapters someone told Draco, one being there is a higher chance of splinching, and I'm sure that even when Dumbledore tried he didn't succed the first time remeber how everyone just kept spinning on the spot.

Another thing is that a fourth year could never use a unforgivable curse without being detected, Draco would be in a hearing, and as moody (Crouch J.r) said that if they even tried they would only be able to give him a bloody nose.

But the story altogether was really good, I liked it but in the second task you made Draco soft, which I like alot seeing that he puts his elf very high makes him seem like a sweet heart, brings out the good in him, so this was a good job over all!!
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LMFAO! That was awesome :) I love your stories, I'm working on reading them all XD

awesome! I totally love it...well anything with draco malfoy..hehehe or tom..;)

really good story, nice legnth, I think you portrayed draco very well

I would have thought the answer to be "heart".

The only issue (in an otherwise absolutely brilliant story) I have is with Draco not rolling Voldemort. Draco proved he could handle not only Voldemort's best laid plans, all his lackeys and Harry Potter that Voldemort could not SIMULTANEOUSLY. On top of that, the lengendary Voldemort he recieves is a crippled, blanketed, shell of a wizard. I could understand Draco not just smashing his head in the first time if and only if it was because he had no idea how far the Death Eater orgnization went (Snape, Krum's teacher, his Father are only a part). But in handing over Harry Potter to someone who nearly Cucitatious(sp?) him? Draco should have usurped him and used the name Voldemort as a cover.

Why wouldn't Harry Potter escape with the help of his parents when Malfoy arranged the ambush?

Other than that, brilliant. This is the Draco I keep hoping to see and never do. It disgusts me that the "popular bullies" are just constantly defeated but never have any victories. If that was the case, they wouldn't be bullies or popular. Draco proves himself all his faults but also deservedly Slytherin-manipulative, clever, exemplarary.

Well, I got it sort of right. Truth can be sonomous with giving your word.

I think the sphinxs riddle is either your heart or trust.

does that mean Harry was wanking?? Is that what that wizard rymne means? Or is it just enie meanie minie moe?

It is a better story. But this one is entertaining too.

Slytherin rocks! Hahahahahaha! You rule that bug Draco! Ha! lol

Squash you, like a bug." Hah! that's great! I'm so glad you have other storys up. They'll help sate my cravings for the Seers.

LOL! Harry died yay! I'm so very happy ^.^ And Draco's still ALIVE and charming as ever >.< I really liked the fact that Draco whooped Harry Potty's ** every time in the tasks! So very wovely ^.^

Argh poor Draco.. Voldemort has to mess up the whole thing by getting brought back to life and **... /.\

^.^ Thanks for the reviews ^_^ I like this fic so far! Draco is just to cute! I wanna hug him... and snuggle >.

I still love this story. It's the best. EVER. I realized the other day, it's been almost 2 years since I started reading your stories, so I decided to reread the one that got me started. You've done pretty well since you've started. You've kept all the great things that made me like your writing in the first place, esp. that wicked sense of humor. I miss those weekly updates, though. I know, if all those OTHER reviewers would get it together.