Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Will's POV is handled perfectly, and the wedding scene is truly sweet. And Vaugh speaks french. Really, what more can you ask for in a fic?

Are those really thier middle names? Great story I can't wait for you to update. Poor Will

I love the Will angst. Keep it up.

very nicley done! i really liked the bit about syd's smile!

Nice job so far.

I particularly like the part about Will being certain Sydney's smile could shine through a brick wall. Very descriptive.

Please continue... you're on to something here.