Nicely done. There are times when the story demands a vivid painting with each detail presented and flowing into the other. And then there are times when brevity is the direct heart of the matter. Personally, I think brevity is the more difficult skill.

You painted a wonderful, and very realistic picture of our two heroines (and our two heroes). I loved the "I'm not worthy" line. Very much in keeping with Wolvewood canon.

I have been waiting to review this for so long because I didn't want to come out as a defined fan of shoujo ai (being a woman, that casts major aspersions on my personal orientation to some who think that "straight girls" only like shounen ai)
I love this fic. You are one of the best writers of Milly/Meryl that there is. Please write more-and show that spammer Vashra Blood-Reeper what good, in-character, believable shoujo ai writing is. Maybe "she" (I still think "she's" a guy) will go away then. ^^

*blinks, stares, smiles.*

I love you. *glomp*

Shoujo ai rules us all... *maniacal laughter*

You have a very poetic style that is a true pleasure to read.

How nice.

Just let go after a while and move on. Or wait and hope.

Ah, beautiful.

Just beautiful

*blinks* ... whoa. I mean... wow. o_o That's one of the best portayals of Milly/Meryl I've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. I'd like to say "Make it longer!", but I don't think that that could necessarily improve it: it's wonderful as is. ^_^ Thank you *very* much for writing it and for sharing it with us readers.

My, that was different. I like your writing style! Not many can pull off jumping dates like that, but I like how well the story flows. It seems rather quick, but when you think about it, it's kinda subtle and I like that. I'm surprised not many have reviewed this story, though. Anyways, great job. I look forward to reading more works from you. ^_^
-Kuko-chan

I just wanted to thank you for sharing this beautiful story with the world... I read it half expecting to find the usual shoddy, rushed work that seems to prevail on most fanfiction sites. Needless to say I was plesantly surprised. This was well thought out, wonderfully poetic, and it expressed a lovely bittersweet mood (I'll admit, it made me tear up a little). To put an end to my babbling, I really did love this...and now I'm going to have to stay up and read the rest of your stuff. ::sigh:: Oh well. Sleep is for the weak anyway. ^_-

My that was dramatic. I've always thought Milly and Meryl as sisters rather than in a Yuri/shoujo ai sense (it's like Sakura and Tomoyo in Cardcaptor Sakura). I think what you wrote here is more of shoujo ai really. I suppose Yuri is something worth R rated or higher. But on with my comments...again your writing style is quite impressive. There was more dialogue this time though you managed to add some appropriate sentences to create a good atmosphere.