In the "warning" area it says "implied m/m sex, implied rape" am I the only one who thinks that nothing is implied at all, it's just outright said?

Good story anyway...

Nice dark fic. Well written.

I don't usually read such dark fics, mainly because they are appalling written with no justification for the actions and circumstances. However that was amazing, I sat completely still reading it. Every action and word stayed in character and that was a brilliant ending. I shivered when I got to the last words and I'm glad i don't know what he suffered next, i' trying to block the mental ideas out.
Well done and I liked your touch about Draco, not evil or good yet *smiles*. thanks for that story.

Wonderful... Great descriptions, contrasts, everything... And Snape's compassion and worry over Draco is a wonderful bit in there.

oh someone rescue the poor boy, cannot resist sev torture but i do like my happy endings sob! your story is really well written and just flows wonderfully.

Phew. How brilliant. Very, very good. Lucius' psyche is perfect, and this manifestation of Severus is one I've tried playing with a little before, so I recognise it well. And it does work, especially with a Luicus like the one you've created.
Amazing. If you want something perhaps a little similar, you could try reading Games by Dark Lassie, my other pen name. That has other aspects of it too, but some of the same power-play that's in your story.
~SS~

Lucius in this fic scares me, he seems the eptiome of person with narcisstic disorder. too bad Severus has turned away from him too late :(

That was brilliant! Very intense, and it was right inside Malfoy's state of mind. One of the best fics I've read recently.

Only six reviews? It deserves a lot more. Apart from the occasional out of place americanism in Lucius's thoughts, this was well written, thought provoking and highly disturbing. There needs to be more dark Lucius/Severus, so thank you.

Wow...that's pretty amazing. I love the Lucius/Severus pairing, and your portrayal is vivid and full of imagery. Well done, write more!

This was beautiful...dark and twisted, of course, but so well written that it was actually a pleasure to read. This is exactly how I picture a Severus/Lucius relationship...less about fluffiness or romance, more about suffering and desperation. And yet there's still some definite affection on Lucius's side...nice complexity.

Oh God...That is soooo dark... I love it!!! Write more!!!! Snape is a **, huh?? You should write more fanfics with him in that position.
You're good.....

Woah........That's pretty full on...
But, you've portrayed it well...Is it a one off fic? or part of a longer series?
..........Very dark and angst..but suited to their relationship.....
Email me if you write new fics!

Very nice and dark, and Lucius' feelings were nicely done, his possessiveness and twisted caring.