plz update soon, this is good

I like the concept of the Demon training grounds. I wish that you would expand on it though. Losing ones memory and changing to your cursed form is anti-climatic for one of the more powerful caves that hardly anyone comes out of. For an interesting twist, I would have like to see the demon be able to switch the curses triggers (i.e. Cold Water = Boy, Warm Water = Girl). This would add confusion to Ryoga explanation of how the curse works. If he tries to show Ranko that she really is a boy using Cold water and his form doesn’t change (insert reaction here).
I am enjoying the story so far, keep up the good work.

I think Ranko is recovering her memory too easily.
Also, I think it would have been interesting if the curse hadn't reverted because she no longer had a male ego to revert to.
What if she sought out 'professonal' help for her 'problem' whose 'cure' locks her in female form not realizing she was originally a boy.
Anyway, I just hope Ranma actually learns something from this and doesn't make an enemy out of every single person she mets here.
Also this would be a chance for us to see Ranko's feminine side.
You know there's one way Ryoga can test to see if it's Ranma in an instant.
This is a good story.

I think you should know, you got your chapters switched.

As interesting as it is for "Ranko" to be living in the dark about "her" past, I think that Ryouga should tell all. That doesn't necessarily mean she has to believe him, although if he demonstrates the effect cold water has on him, it might become difficult to deny.

Well...From looking at your summary I'm a tad dubious. This is a premise I've seen many, MANY times before.

Chapter 1

Bit of a formatting problem, I suggest you put more space or SOMETHING to separate scene changes, otherwise it can get a bit confusing.

You kinda just jump into the scene with Akane, transitions should be at least a bit more gradual than that.

Genma ran off on a training trip and forgot to tell Soun? Doesn't sound right to me, but hey, it's your fic.

Chapter 2

100 yen, just so you know, is about $1.00 U.S.

Chapter 3

The jumping back and forth in time is getting a bit confusing...

Glad to see you started putting spaces between scene changes, nice job.

Your writing's a lot better in this chapter.

Chapter 4

Good chapter.

Overall

Now, when this started out I didn't care much for it, but it's grown on me the last couple of chapters. It started out being a bit of an overused concept, but you've started being much more original now and the story's the better for it. Your writing is improving with every chapter, but it's a bit light descriptively. Keep up the good work.

Megumi seems a lot like Akane but an actual martial artist
instead of a joke. Not to mention more manipulative and much
less honorable.
Ryoga showing up isn't that big a stretch he finds Ranma
wherever he goes. Ranmas not questioning if Ryoga knew of
his/her past and everyones acceptance of him staying there
is a bit much tho'.

Please, please don't let Ranko get her/his memories back! At least not anytime soon. I am getting tired of amnesia stories where the victim predicably gets his/her memories back. Personally I hope that Ranko never remembers and manages to make a new life for herself away from the crazyness of Nerima. In any case, please keep writing! This is a good story.

Depending on the timeline, I would have had Ryoga attack before anything else. But seeing where your story is, I can understand why he hesitated before attacking. ^^;

Stop using < and > for thoughts! Or, if you absolutely must use < and > then remember to replace < with &lt; and > with &gt; before you post it! Otherwise browsers will not show any of the 'thoughts'.

Not a flame, but do you even proofread your chapter before you put it up? I saw many MANY points where you have half thought out sentences and places where it just screams more information is needed.

Case in point this line:
thought Ranko as she followed the mortified Hitomi into the school.

What the heck is that supposed to be? It's like you left out the thoughts and we are just supposed to automatically know?

Hello! It's me! You know, the one that suggested the Ranko/Ryouga romance! Uh, right! Heh, I see you had this little poll. I haven't been on FF.net for a long time.
Why am I telling you all this? anyways, I'll come back in another few years to check on you! Bye!

Well damn.

Lirena:GREAT FANFIC!YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS RIGHT?IT MEANS YOU MUST COUNINUE!By the way Ranko is Ranma right?

Mimi:Duh!

-L^-^

Ryoga would never offer anyone pork buns... he turns into a pig and has a huge phobia of being eaten.

Pork=pig meat.