Sappy but good. Now how about a nice hot, steamy sex scene.

Uhm...how can 2 guys have a kid. I mean sure they could adopt but what are the chances of finding an orphan that looks just like the parents when it's an orphan?! And if it was the real parents adopting their own kid,they should've put the kid in a foster home instead of an orphinage.

LOL! ^_^ Really, you have a talent for writing fairy tales. From the beginning to the end, it sounded just like a Grimm's Fairy Tale or something. The fact that Bakura was a queen and MARRIED to Yami was very, VERY amusing. ^_^

I'd also like to congratuale you on how you portrayed Bakura in this. Many people would portray Ryou as the innocent one who gets caught by his evil, insane brother, and Malik as the handsome hero that comes to the rescue. ^)^

This is going on my Favourites list. ^^

Zai jian! ^^

->Blue Mediva

Cute! swet!me loved this one too!

cute cute cute!^^

Wee, that was cute! Good job! ^_^

Cute, but why didn't Prince Bakura keep the promise he made to his 'mother'? He didn't kill Yami Malik.
Heh. I liked it. Really liked it when Yami Bakura is telling Ryou to kill Yami Malik; it was funny. ^_^

~Sam

YW- I found it funny! And at the same time sick. What about you Joey? *Joey is snorring on the couch* WHEELER! I guess I shouldn't yell at him.after all he's going to die.

Cosmo- WHAT!

YW- Yeah, oh well it's good so um good luck!

awww, cute ^_^ I wanna write a Honda/Otogi fic *blinks* but I can't get around to it, yet... eh, pleh... sooner or later... anyways ^_^ I like, yep, I do

So cute! I love it!