 yumi2482 2008-10-19 . chapter 19awesome. sweet wow |
 Myuu-Foxgirl 2007-08-30 . chapter 19I find it totally awesome how you've managed to more-or-less keep them in-character as both themselves and Yuki and Shuichi. Actually, it's almost more surprising that there are such obvious paralels between them.. or maybe not. *shrug* It's just cool, and feeds my mind more fodder for cracky thoughts.
Because my brain is odd, too (you're not alone in that!), I keep thinking up vague Gravi/HP cross/melds. I doubt I would ever be able to do as awesome a job with it as you have done. (For instance, my brain is currently fixating on Shuichi-is-really-Harry-hahaha even though it's so very improbable.. Not to mention I have more logical [insofar as smut can be called logical...] fics to be working on. Haha.)
But back to the point. It's just so freaking COOL to see a HP/Gravi fic. Now, not to be obnoxious, here, but... could you please try to update soon? Or have you moved all your fics elsewhere for archiving? If the latter, where might I find this elsewhere posted? (And if you made sense of THAT, kudos to you. xD)
I should stop while I'm ahead na no da~ Kumagoro says you rock!
xD
~Myuu~ |
 just like luna 2006-05-24 . chapter 19OMG i LOVE your story. t's fantastic! and you have a great sense of humour. it's kinda like mine, which is surprising cause most people think i'm wierd when i make jokes that i find funny. (sorry, i'm blabbering) anyway,just to say YAY, and hope for more soon.
Love Just Like Luna (aka Lou) |
 fluffy-sama's worshiper 2006-03-10 . chapter 4lol u made Draco Aizawa! XD lol i cant imagine Seamus being Mr. K this is funny. |
 pezoom 2005-08-17 . chapter 1Very cute. I'll definitely be keeping up with it (if you ever update again, hah).
There are places where the writing jumps a bit, but that isn't uncommon. Some inconsistencies in the plot, but over all, very well done.
I'll watch this story from now on, but don't expect to see me holding my breath. :P |
 wishwryter 2005-08-14 . chapter 19 LOL! That is my fav kind of humor! I love Sirius in this fic! So funny! I also like Gravitation too, well maybe not much the manga as anime. PLEASE keep updating! |
 PadfootGal 2005-07-18 . chapter 19 JAMES:(yelling) where is sirius? im gonna kill him. THIS IS ALL *HIS* BLOODY FAULT!
PADFOOTGAL:(frowning at james) apart from the fact that this has my 2 least favourite couples in it (sirius/remus and harry/snape) i actually like this fic. update soon. i'm closin this quickly before james does some serious damage. no pun intended.
(curtain closes bt not before the audience sees james pinning sirius to a wall, showing him a picture and sirius screaming "NO-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O...") |
 PadfootGal 2005-07-18 . chapter 17 JAMES:(happily) heh heh heh. i broke them up.
LILY:(appearing) JAMES HAROLD POTTER!
JAMES:(blanching) lily darling...
LILY: DONT YOU "LILY DARLING" ME! YOU TAKE THAT SPELL OFF THIS INSTANT! I WILL *NOT* ALLOW YOU TO MAKE OUR SON UNHAPPY JUST BECAUSE OF AN OLD SCHOOLBOY GRUDGE!
JAMES:(pleading) but honey -
LILY: NO BUTS! *NOW* JAMES HAROLD POTTER!
JAMES: ok ok. (takes the spell off muttering under his breath) but i'm still gonna kill sirius. |
 PadfootGal 2005-07-18 . chapter 15 JAMES: t... together? *stabs himself with wand*must... die... must... die...
RANDOM PERSON: uh... james? you're already dead. |
 PadfootGal 2005-07-18 . chapter 12 hi. me again. normally i dont like harry/snape. (specially after what happened in hbp) but this is cute. *glances around nervously* at the moment i' hiding. see, james is trying to kill sirius. and i have a feeling he's gonna go after you and me next... oh no! here he comes! *ducks*
DUCK: quack quack.
ME: aw shaddap. |
 PadfootGal 2005-07-18 . chapter 11 SIRIUS:(moaning and sobbing) i'm doomed. i hate my life. i'm in hell.
JAMES:(appearing) padfoot whats wrong?
SIRIUS: oh prongs... its horrible... please dont kill me...
JAMES: i wont kill you, paddy. tell me.
SIRIUS: ok... its harry and snape... they're... they're...
JAMES: they're what? what did that bastard do to my son?
SIRIUS: he didnt DO anything... they're..., they're... oh prongs, they're gay lovers!! (starts crying)
JAMES: (stares in total shock)
SIRIUS: prongsie?
JAMES:(quietly) i. am. going. to. kill. you.
SIRIUS: A-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H! (runs off)
JAMES:(running after him) I AM GOING TO KILL YOU, YOU MANGY MUTT! I'LL RIP YOU TO PIECES AND FEED YOU TO HAGRID'S SKREWTS! COME HERE AND LET ME RIP YOU! I'LL PUT THE AVEDA KEDAVRA ON YOU! I'LL MAKE VOLDY RAPE YOU! DIE-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E! |
 PadfootGal 2005-07-18 . chapter 5 A-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H-H!
that... that... traumitized... must kill myself... must... kill... |
 Lady-Slytherin-Snape 2004-09-24 . chapter 18really goodmade me laugh and cry i really love the sene with the rehersal lol well i hope to read next chapter soon |
 nonexisting nobody 2004-06-10 . chapter 18great story, highly amusing... |
 The Anti-social Squirrel 2004-05-06 . chapter 18*sniff* No... you can't leave it there... *pats Harry's head* It's okay, Harry, Snape's just being a stupidhead... he lurves you! ^^
[insert requisite begging for update]
~Crys |