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darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 10,
abusegreat to bad it's over .
darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 9,
abusewell at least they moved on a little .
darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 8,
abusewell that was funny .
darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 7,
abuseman this is bad for him thought only fighter could move like that .
darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 6,
abusevery cool .
darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 5,
abusereally like this does no mirror the show and has it story . wonder what would happen now . he better run . i think the high command would like to get him now .
darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 4,
abuseman that was priceless . what next .
darkfinder
2006-05-27
ch 3,
abusevery good surprised did not have a little fun .
darkfinder
2006-05-26
ch 2,
abusevery good but why go to him . but things always go bad .
darkfinder
2006-05-26
ch 1,
abusegreat so far but in a way always hoped he would move on . wonder what next .
Darklight
2005-08-06
ch 10,
abuseliked, damn when I read Cyclones I thought they would make an appearance, too bad would have liked the crossover.
LoveChilde
2003-11-21
ch 10,
abuseGreat story! I'm glad there was a happy ending- I watch the show for angst, read the fics for 'shipper fun. Although, not too 'shippy and there was good action too, so kudos all 'round.
Rakel
2003-07-29
ch 10,
abuseI'm so glad you went with the happy ending. :-) As fun as angst is for a while, i love a good, happy ending.


Blowing up PK buildings really is becoming John's calling card. It's fast becoming his raison d'etre. :-)

Also, i notice this has sequels. Lots of fun to be had there, so i;m gonna go check 'em out.

Rakel x
Natters
2003-03-23
ch 10,
abuseaww. cute ending
AnnaSun
2003-03-06
ch 10,
abuseThis fanfic is so cool! you write the characters brillently.
If u could R&R my fanfic 'looks can be deciving' that would be appiceated. I have uploaded chapter5.

Hope to read more.
Thanks
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