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| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 10, | abusegreat to bad it's over . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 9, | abusewell at least they moved on a little . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 8, | abusewell that was funny . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 7, | abuseman this is bad for him thought only fighter could move like that . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 6, | abusevery cool . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 5, | abusereally like this does no mirror the show and has it story . wonder what would happen now . he better run . i think the high command would like to get him now . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 4, | abuseman that was priceless . what next . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-27 ch 3, | abusevery good surprised did not have a little fun . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-26 ch 2, | abusevery good but why go to him . but things always go bad . |
| darkfinder 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abusegreat so far but in a way always hoped he would move on . wonder what next . |
| Darklight 2005-08-06 ch 10, | abuseliked, damn when I read Cyclones I thought they would make an appearance, too bad would have liked the crossover. |
| LoveChilde 2003-11-21 ch 10, | abuseGreat story! I'm glad there was a happy ending- I watch the show for angst, read the fics for 'shipper fun. Although, not too 'shippy and there was good action too, so kudos all 'round. |
| Rakel 2003-07-29 ch 10, | abuseI'm so glad you went with the happy ending. :-) As fun as angst is for a while, i love a good, happy ending. Blowing up PK buildings really is becoming John's calling card. It's fast becoming his raison d'etre. :-) Also, i notice this has sequels. Lots of fun to be had there, so i;m gonna go check 'em out. Rakel x |
| Natters 2003-03-23 ch 10, | abuseaww. cute ending |
| AnnaSun 2003-03-06 ch 10, | abuseThis fanfic is so cool! you write the characters brillently. If u could R&R my fanfic 'looks can be deciving' that would be appiceated. I have uploaded chapter5. Hope to read more. Thanks |