Oh, man. I am so crying right now. I must have read this story three times, and I love it more and more. Your style of writing, and the idea are so heartbreakingly sweet, that I don't even know what to say. I am a total sucker for these romantic endings, but this story was sweeter then any fairytale fanfiction. This was such a beautiful ficlet, and I just wanted to let you know that I hope you never stop writing.

o man ur first story made me cry and this one makes me want to cry all over again. poor will but he's happy now right? :)

I really like this! Please keep it up!
Oh, I wouldn't mind beta-ing, if u like.
PS. Please check out my HP fic - tonks The full Story according To ME! And if u like Tamora Pierce, I've got a Kel/Joren fic posted as well.

Aw, Will needs a hug. (I will be glad to give one to him *wink*) That's so sad!

I'm lazy so sue me. I can't be bothered to log in on this stupid *Kicks computer* slow *kicks it again* hamster run *and again* computer *one last time for luck*. Well now there is no way I can do anything on this computer now I'll give you your review.

Wow! Thank you so much for the little note at the top, makes all my typing worth it. I would love to beta read for you if you need it, I am online pretty much every day so you would have no problem with timing, unless I'm away, as I have been recently. But I'm back! Email me to talk about it if you want.

Anyway, the writing at the top, first paragraph seems to go right across the screen and go on for about another 3 screens. It's annoying to read like that, so maybe uploading and replaceing might fix that? I don't know, buty give it a shot.

Really sad. Great the way Jane included a message in the frame, so she gave it to him then? Hm. The fresh writing is mysterious suggesting she just wrote it, another thing to think about there.

As ever you have the characters down perfectly. and I like the way Bran tries to bring Will out of his depression.
This is a good way of providing an insight into what Will is thinking, something I know from experience is hard to do.
Great sequel and I wait your response.
HuntressDiana

I think you're going to find that the number of reviews for a peice like this will be quite sparse, simply because there is little you can say that could possibly glorify it any further. Absolutely excellent.

LOL
Heeeeeeeee ^^
I. Love. This. Story. ^_^

Awww! That was lovely! Just the right amount of depressing angst, and slight humor! Lovely song also. Indy band, arent they? I need to look them up so I can actually hear what the song sounds like. Anyway, back to the story. Thank you for not making it overly sappy!!! (You need a *littlelittle* bit of sap in these kind of things, neh?) But it was very nice. Fitting in how Simon and Barney didn't believe the whole 'car accident' lie, Bran still trying to cheer him up (::resists pinching Bran's cheek::), and Will writing to Jane in his journal. I hope finding the note on the back of the picture helped Will. ::smirks:: Klutz. Lovely P.S. and ending! Keep writing! We need more fics here! Email me anytime. Cheers!
-Alana
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