Wow, the ending threw me...didn't expect it to be a plan the 3 had cooked up. Good story!

I've only read the first two chapters, but I'm enjoying the story so far. Hmm, for criticism, I suppose you should work on trying to be more authentic with your dialogue. There were definitely some witty lines in there, but I'd try to imagine how exactly the character would say them. Same goes for thoughts. Don't get the wrong idea, though, I assure you this is a very enjoyable fanfiction.

I like this story, even if it is a bit unusual and totally OOC. Maybe that's what makes me like it. But I like it a lot. I'll come back to review some more soon. x)

Why did you make Ginny "bad"? Even if it's about Harry, this is so OOC!

YAY...
...yay!!great story! again i loved it, it was just so mondo sweet! GREAT JOB! AND CONGRATS!!

-ABBI ;0

P.S. YAY! :P :D ;)

GREAT STORY!
I loved it. It was so cute!
:p :D ;)
-ABBI ;0

great story, i loved it

LoveItLoveItLoveItLoveItLoveItLoveItLoveItLoveIt!

Wait wait wait. What the hell? They made that potion on the FIRST day of classes. Here they are nearly at the winter holidays. I'm pretty freaking sure that they would have had a lesson in between now and then. Yes, I remember you mentioning that Snape was sick, but that was after Halloween. Therefore, what's up with this? That’s a major “plot” error if I’ve ever seen one. You see, I but quotation marks around ‘plot’ because this travesty which you have written does not deserve the word ‘plot’. I’ve had enough with this “story”.
I may have reviewed this before… I’m not quite sure. I’ve seen so many stories like this, you see, so it’s hard to keep track. So if I HAVE already told you how much this needs revision, then I am sorry. Anywho… you should revise this.

That just doesn't seem realistic.

^.^ I absolutely love the story! In fact, I read it from start to finish, and ate dinner a bit later than I'm used to in order to accomplish this... But, anyways, this story is so well written, and I'm happy I came upon it! ((Favs))

~Tia~

that was awesome

very cute.

I was so surprised that ginny was acting so OC but because I liked the plot I continued reading and I'm glad I did!

Excellent job.

Your story is pretty good, but I can't help but cringe at the clicheness of draco having a nightmare aboiut his father.

I LOVED IT!! IT WAS POSITIVELY WONDERFUL! INTO MY FAV STORIES LIST IT GOES!! ok now i gotta go check out more fics by u! c ya