HAHAHAHA Pilaf. Of course! Only a Pilaf plan could go so horribly awry.

Intresting, nice job.

*chuckles* Ok, I loved this one. Especially Jiisu/Jeice. He was a riot - so like him to whine and moan. I'll never forget when Goku punched him on Namek and he squealed like a girl, then got all high and mighty and actually said, "How DARE you?" in this really angry voice. And the villain being foiled the way he was, by the loyalty and stupidity of the minions he revived instead of a wiser wish... loved it. Just loved it.

I feel sorry for Jiisu... Radditz was right and very fun to read, but I feel sorry for Jissu... Maybe he'll change?

Anyway, this is nicely written and has very interesting insight into the characters.

*thoughtful look* You know, technically, they would have been able to wish Raditz and Nappa back to life themselves after this, because they were alive, and they woildn't have been dead for a year. Oh, the possibilities. This was good, made me chuckle a bit.

OK, I lied... THIS one, FINALLY, is the last one that I had to read before catching up to Raditz's Return. That was was great too. I love how you turn Raditz into an "obnoxious little bastard" to use your own words. It was cute. And even though all Raditz said was true, I do have to feel just a little sorry for jiisu.

OK... I have to go to work now... but I think I'll read more over x-mas break. I can't wait to review Raditz Return. Bye for now.

Lone Warrior2

OK, I just had to post a review, for the record. I've been following your stories on your site, and decided to wander over to FF.N to post my own stuff. (I had sent you a story fragment involving Raditz picking up a very dirty and not-as-dumb-as-she(it?)-looks slave. Don't know if you recall. :-)

Anyway, this story made me laugh my arse off. I actually printed up all your shorts so I can go over them at doctor's offices and such. They are all fantastic. You have an incredible eye for detail and continuity. I use your stories as a standard for my own, trying to go back and poke holes in my plots.

Keep up the wonderful work and hurry up and finish Deceiver's Legacy! LOL

B*B

Suzanne

Hehe… this one truly made me laugh. What with Goku’s sarcastic smart-alecky side coming through while he’s mocking Jeice. “This place sucks.” Oh, and was that Pilaf who made the wish? Or does it not matter?

Until next time.

lol

Yeah! I loved it! Why did it have to end... *sniff* you know what would be really cool? If someone wish Rady-chan back!

hey! great fic! do you have a fic called:"Raditz's Cycle" ? where is it at i can't find it. bye

I thought Vegeta was the only Saiyan who could use logic on that level? This is way too good dude.

*LOL* great follow-up!

Hehehehehe. I love to see Raditz being annoying to that um, nevermind, Jeice. GO RADITZ! And the little blue guy was Emperor Pilaf, right?

*giggles* That was a nice short one! _ But I liked it! *giggles* Radditzu picking on Jeice, nice one. *giggles*

What-the-hell was that? All I understood was that Raditz took-a-piss at Jeice in Hell, and then for some strange reason Emperor Pilaf is surveying the whole scene with spy cameras or something. What-the-fuck? It doesn't make any sense. Shit-can!