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Ro0tin4Kagome 6/20/07 . chapter 4
WoW! Never in my life have i been so ASHAMED or Inuyasha.. and yet mad and so pround of Kagome. Im Mad bcaz she forgave him so easily. I guess i cant understand my first 'love' betrayin me... we just got distant... but... to do that is horrible. Did this reallii happen to someone..bcaz giveme the address to his house.bcaz idc or understand how she can forgive him ..i sure ass hell cant... that was ..just horrible.. i want to jump in the screen and kick his ass... yet if you thinkabout it..forInuyasha its not reallii possible to do that bcaz pple thinkhes disgusting.. but ... still i wanna kick his ass so bad.. he wont be able to recognize AFTER he heals.

... idk.. but if ths story is about u.. you are frickin incredible.. i envy who ever'kagome' is .

much love

r4k
GothicBlacre 2/14/05 . chapter 4
I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR A STORY LIKE THIS AH THIS WAS SO GOOD PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL (?) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS THIS IS TO GOOD TO STOP I WAS CRYING SO HARD BUT I LOVED IT :) GREAT REALLY GREAT BUT I KEEP WONDERING AND I DON'T WANNA WONDER I LOVE IT :)
pink twilight 6/2/03 . chapter 4
omg this is a really really good fan fic but seriously i almost died for kagome i totally felt what she felt. omg so sad and depressing i felt my heart rip out. ur a good writer !
littocherryblossom 2/5/03 . chapter 4
i really liked your story even though it wasn't one of those i hate you kikyou i'm going to go to kagome or i cheated on kagome for you kikyou kinda fics.i was,very inspiring.i guess...you could say that it had an uplifting kinda plot to it. .' -lcb
Laura-chan 2/5/03 . chapter 4
It's beautiful and very very sad.

I can almost feel Kagome's feeling. When Inuyasha told her the truth my heart clenched in my chest and I almost couldn't breathe... HELL, even now I have some difficulties breathing!

I'm sorry for Kagome, this is the saddest story I ever read, but I love it.

You're great and the plot is original.

I was feeling really bad when Inuyasha told Kagome she wasn't his first... it was like he said that to me.

please, write other stories, 'cause you're just too good.

(Sorry if my english isn't the best, but I'm italian)
IceRayven 2/4/03 . chapter 4
The ending came out sad, but beautifully written. I'm all for happy endings though - Maybe someday we'll get the rest of the story, when it becomes happily ever after? *g* Keep on writing!
Silver Falconwolf 2/4/03 . chapter 1
This story is great!
Angelstars 2/4/03 . chapter 4
Ya finished then! Well I’m pleased that everything is alright...as for this ficcie it was very well written and I’m happy to have read it. Keep up the great work _ you know ya a have talent .

-Angie
Classic Cowboy 2/4/03 . chapter 4
beautiful ending for a beautiful story. that was an excellent yet sad story, you made it all seem so realistic and really made the reader feel for the characters. again excellent job, and I gotta say you are a really really tallented writer
XxHindiGoddessxX 2/4/03 . chapter 4
(obviously to lazey to sign in _ my real ID is XxDarkGoddessxX )

So this really happened to you? I'm sorry to hear that, but Im glad you got through it! This story is amazing, very few stories have the power to make me cry, and if I were Kagome, I'd probely go team up with Naraku and beat the crap outta Inuyasha, *crowd sweatdrop* _

anyway you probely think a 12 year old like me hasn't gone through heart breaks, and I haven't, but my friend is 13 and she had a 17 years old BF and he cheated on her and she didn't get over him for about a year, but I was the one there to comfort her... anyway enough sad tales ! I love your story!

Queen of the Evil Evil Butt Bunnies

Jennifer
IceRayven 1/31/03 . chapter 3
Don't know really what I can say! Umm, it feels like it has a life of it's own? Reminds me of something I went through before, it hurt(well more like agony, but anyone who has been there knows how it is) then, but it's quite an amusing tale now. You're pretty talented with making emotional scenes in the writing seem realistic! Keep it up, and hopefully the future will be much brighter for you!
Angelstars 1/31/03 . chapter 3
I can't say nothing, actually i was wondering if i could review 'cause that was so sad...and you were giving off those vibes that something similar has happened - which i can understand why you felt the need to let it all out with writing and using characters on this basis - I wrote a very personal story using the Animé i related to at the time (Their were no lies) so i understand completely the importance of letting your feelings all out this way (it does help somewhat if only a small amount)
Classic Cowboy 1/31/03 . chapter 3
This is great stuff! I can't wait to see how everything works out, hurry up with the last part!
littocherryblossom 1/30/03 . chapter 1
ah! .' -lcb
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