Hey! This reaslly looks like something that Syd would think if she had some thime to properly grieve Danny after the takedown of SD-6.

I liked it lots!!

Brittany

Just one major point of feedback to offer... "his entire fault" is grammatically crack-addled. You should be saying "entirely his fault". I'd probably be able to offer feedback on the story as a whole if I hadn't been distracted to the point of madness by the repeated "entire fault"s. :) So to sum up... you should definitely be doing your English homework instead. Write afterword, but study the language and its useage thoroughly, not only for your self but also for my sanity. Thank you. :)