 FrictionX42 2/3/10 . chapter 1Nice touch, leading us on to think that Akane had broken up with him again, when in truth, they'd actually 'gotten together'.
Although I normally don't react well to stream-of-conciousness writing, you pulled it off pretty well. An entertaining, if short, read. |
 O'Donoghue 10/29/08 . chapter 1An old favourite to this old fan. Well writen and with the tension of the series post snapping, though a little light on the humour. Thanks for updating it for s poor changes to the formatting. |
 jdcocoagirl 6/4/08 . chapter 1this so nice i wish you made it longer... and hope u made more RaAk story more soon. |
 Ranmano1fan 4/28/07 . chapter 1Nice story, I really enjoyed it. I couldn't figure out what Akane had done until the end when she kicked Ranma awake. Makes you seriously think about their relationship and where it was going. I wouldn't mind reading some more of your Ranma 1/2 stories when they come up. Keep up the great work! :) |
 Xasonnex 7/26/05 . chapter 1Great story, I've been a fan of your work for years! I wish you wrote more Ranma, but I'll take what I can get! |
 xero-ghost 8/19/04 . chapter 1wow.. all i can say is nice job.. funny all throughout while seriously looking at the relationship... |
 Hentaikoneko 11/21/03 . chapter 1I LIKED THIS FIC..! |
 Jho 5/14/03 . chapter 1lol, you really had me going there. |
 Kris15 11/16/01 . chapter 1That was cute! For the longest time I could not figure out what Akane was talking about. I wouldn't mind reading another Ranma fic *hint hint* _ |
 Ysabet 7/3/01 . chapter 1Hmmmmm... got a certain 'plausibility' to it that I like. Good story! |
 Vibrant Filly 6/1/01 . chapter 1O.o Oh my. |
 Brayniac 3/6/01 . chapter 1 Great ending! I didn't figure it out until Kasumi walked in. |
 kittu9 1/22/01 . chapter 1Interesting! |
 Lys 1/8/01 . chapter 1Hee! Amazing fic! I sooo luved it! Waitta go! |
 Lynne 11/29/00 . chapter 1 I LOVE IT! great line at the end. I can see a lot of myself in Akane. Minus the hair... and the Matial arts... and the fiance... and the sisters... forget it! I lied. Just the way she deals with stuff. But I Definately agree with what the girl said before. WAIT TILL MARRIGE! sorry, strong opinion voicing itself there. Well, my rambling shall ceace.
Lynne |