This is wonderful! I didn't see one odd sentence. I could never tell it wasn't your main language. Very good! Touching.

I love this fic...and no...there aren't any grammatical errors that I can tell.
Anyway...I'm so glad that someone finally wrote a decent Fei and Elly (or rather...something about their various incarnates) and how they're eternally bound together...It's quite romantic..

T.T i liked! SO beautiful! Write MORE , meow?
I'm insane ignore me... :D :D

It was absolutely AMAZING!
. I loved the part where it takes two to make an angel to fly.

SWEET!

I am a fellow writer as well. Good luck in a career.

Very good writing. Write more or I'll make you. Gwahahahahaha

I can't help but say that is fic is one of the most romantically beautiful ones I have ever read.. I can't believe that English isn't your nativ tongue. You're English skills are better than most people I know.. (including me probably.. hehe) But anyway, I loved this fic, and any other fan of Xenogears should. Once again, gorgeous fic, and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future!
=D
-Your local freak n'the box
Blitz

Very good, I'm impressed, even more so since you say english isn't your native tongue. This really inspires me.

Very good, vey good. Sad, but good. One thing I don't get. That's almost the same thing as the ending FMV... Whatever.

It was nice, without being unnecessarily long. Great, and greater since you seem to speak English better than most English-speaking people do. I should know. Yes, you do seem to have a few problems, mainly putting the same word twice in the same sentence (such as "devour its unlucky prey at that prey's final destination") but otherwise, great. Do not read any of my stories. You have far better things to do.