Can You make and make Ron&Hermione do what they were doing before but without stopping. Man That was bloody awesome!

Hm, I liked it. You may just want to rate it T, though; just to be safe.

Good job. {you}

LOVED the story !

Great story, but it was really difficult to read, considering you kept calling Ron a "she".

You really need to consider revising this...

I love this story did you make another your a very talented writer and I love,love,love this story!

WOW! that was rele good R/H FAN FOR LIFE

that was so so so so cool mehn! that was so sweet! aaww! it was really sweet...story's good...i loved it...but, again, there are few mispelled words...>sigh< but really! the story was good...rock on! ciao!

great story!! you should make a secuel!

your spelling's atrocious. it heightens the cheesy soap opera quality.

aw, really sweet! I loved it! But it wasn't PG, btw. lol.

wow!
amazing.. it just so..
you write so..
they're so..
spechless as i am i am in no conditions of reviewing but what the hell

it really was amazingly well written and all!
one thing i found some what hard to believe was that hermione jumped on to her feet and started unbottoning his trousers right away.. not the hermione we know from the books but.. hey she was older right? so i have to give her credit!

just please make me a favour and all the other reviewers and make a sequal or keep writing like you did here!

PG? Yeah, right. I'm trying to sound as nice as I can here, got it?

Wow! that was so good! it is like my favorite story ever! YOu really need to make a sequal! i really wanna print this out but unfortunaley my printer isnt working! Great job!

wonderfull story!

aww...
that was just...just... perfect...;)
I'm so happy right now.. :D
*and smiling like mad*
write more...
I'ts wonderful :)