i think your character's names are wrong, its, Tomoyo, and Eriol...and by the way, its spelt "Kaiju" -.-

AH how kawaii i love it, it could not be any cuter than that and if you make the next chapter bettr you would set a world record on cuteness AH update ssoon please in the name of all that is good if you dont't im gonna die

Oh nevermind. I guess i just missed the pov change. I thought it was still sakura but it was actually syaoran ^_^'

Um... u said meiling and i broke off the engagement? Does that mean sakura and meiling were engaged or was that just a typo?

It's spelled Eriol. Not Eroil.

Well, I guess it was to the point. ... Ugh.

GAH! CONTINUE

omg i lov it i can't wait to read the rest. If there is any more.

Your fic is very flat and quite predictable but it isn't pathetically atrocious.
Make it less typical and use better vocabulary.Don't make the characters OOC.
You could write better stuff.

-RW

its kinda short, but very cute so pleez update soon

More, I like.

This is quite a unique story(Warning:Right at this moment, I think that I'm not acting myself.)Your story is really, really good so far!(That's more like me: illiterate, jumpy, sluring sentences, and insane beyond belief.)I just suffer from having a split-identity that is exactly the opposite of me

I like the beginning. U hav got 2 continue this.

Ja!

~Gloria~

i think its cute so far. But... i need more to know ;) LOL anyway! please update...
thankya
Alflirtbabe

this is interesting
i've just suddenly got a cardcaptor obsession and this story is very in character
i like the plot. i'll look out for more chapters
if your going to write more
hopefully