Its great! Just what they were thinking and acting, it seems so real.

hell...why stop there! you really should redo season 2! this fic was soo awesome keep up the good work.

aww! i love the shipperness- keep it up :)

yay! i love it! as always, great inner conflict with logan!
you've got some spelling errors in here though, and it should be AJBAC, not AJBC.
keep it up :)

hey i'll take whatever max and logan i can get. a craving is a craving.

Ahh... Everyone loves a nice, settled resolution to the Max and Logan situation, and if you do it without including S2, even better! (in my opinion at least).

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*wipes tears from eyes* oh! that was so sweet! It would have been great if you could continue on, it feels a bit weird being finished at that point because it makes readers wonder...what could have happened next? But, its your story *shrugs* *pause* *jumps around in enthusiasm* YAY YAY YAY YAY! *points excitedly at story then does a thumbs up with huge grin on face* YAY!

You're wrong. It is good and it is creative. It's more than something. I loved it.

PLEASE POST MORE! :) ITS GREAT.JUST NEEDS AN ENDING NOT A CLIFF.

You didn't put THE END or TBC at the end of this story, so many of us are waiting to see if you're going to continue.

Beautiful, just beautiful.

The dark, dank corners of the cockles of my heart have been warmed greatly. Thanks.

I will of coures complain that you left it there, but what did you expect.

See? You can't just do that!!!

You just can't write one chapter and leave us hanging like this. I will advice you that you better make this more than good, because this topic has been overdone more than a thousand times. So you better make it stand out from the rest of the other stories.

I was kinda sad that you didn't go into details of what went down at Manticore as in how she got away from them. And I thought that the first thing she would've done was go to Seattle because there, she would've asked for Logan to help her escape, but *shrugs* I guess you have a reason for things not happening like that.

Anyways, post more soon!

Don't just sit there! Write more!

(PLEASE, please write more . . . )

That was really good, I can't wait for more. ^_~

nice.. please keep writing we need all the M/L we can get