This is great! Funny, romantic, and realistic. I totally can see the two of them having this conversation.

Very cute and very original! I like the way you write Wash, and the way you write Zoe loving Wash. It's all really good. Thanks for writing this pair!

"I thought marriage was going to be like a really long one-night stand, with cooing. It's not quite that easy."
I almost want to turn that into a bumper sticker. This is hilarious. Great bit of writing.

I love Zoe and Wash...LOL. Wonderful piece :D

Oh the last two sentences were key to making this a story that is way up here *wiggles hands as high as possible* opposed to way down there *wiggles hand by feet.*

Loved this story. :) Loved Zoe's inner voice, and Wash's outer voice, and the whole logic of the Mal/Zoe dynamic explained in a way that actually makes sense. And the last line... *lol*. Pure Wash. Nicely done.

Man, I loved this. When I grow up, I want a relationship just like Wash and Zoe, it gives me faith. I hope you have more Firefly stories up your sleeve.

Liked this a lot. We don't get many Wash/Zoe fics. "Wash's brows just get closer and closer together and the scowl gets bigger and bigger." Silly I know, but this was one of my favorite lines. Nice work.