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| Constant Comment Tea 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseI thought I had reviewed before, but I guess not. I just finished this for a second time--yes, second. And it was every bit as wonderful as the first time. The insights into the characters were dead-on, and the relationships, in all their complexity and beauty, were canon-accurate. You guys took a portion of the show I'm not particularly crazy about (baby-Conner is gone, Cordy's with Groo, and Angel hates Wesley) and did wonderful things with it. In the end, it's not like it should be, but everything's ok, anyway, which is refreshingly realistic for a fan fiction. Bravo! |
| IceAngel1119 2008-03-25 ch 12, | abuseAmazing! Beautifully crafted and executed. Time travel stories are always hard to do and yours was probably the best I've read in any fandom. The characterizations were spot on and...I just can't gush enough about this fic! lol Oh and the Angel/Cordy friendship/something more was great, as was Darla/Angel. I love how he's so torn up about breaking his promise to her. Simply beautiful. |
| Louvil 2007-03-11 ch 12, | abuseIt was a great,rich trip. I read this a long time ago and never reviewed but it so deserved it!An Inventive story so incredibly well-written. Paradoxes are tricky things.I always wondered what was waiting them after the end of the story. I'm glad not to know for sure.One of the best part was how I could imagine the 'nice' surprises. Thanks to both of you for a great read! |
| Ahsirum 2005-05-23 ch 12, anon. | abuseUgh. I LOVE this. The comment about Al Gore, too. Would have fit right in with the series, and I especially love the dynamics between the characters! (Future Angel and Darla, Cordelia and Angel/Angelus, Fred and Gunn, etc.) |
| Whistler84 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseJust starting to read this and it seems interesting. |
| Leanne8582 2004-04-07 ch 12, | abuseThis was so incredibly good. You and Yahtzee make one of the best writing teams I’ve ever seen. Your styles blend flawlessly. I thought that this was a really great time travel story. And that in itself is an accomplishment. Time-travel is murky and complex. Writing a story that is not only entertaining, but also plausible with realistic consequences is impressive. Also, I liked your president joke, even though it was a little predictable. The thing I liked the most about this fic was the ever present humor. The gang singing the “Gilligan’s Island |
| MysticWolf1 2004-01-01 ch 12, | abuseI read this story on a different site about a year ago. This was about the time I first discovered fan fiction. I have to tell you that this was and still is the best fan fiction story I've read yet. You capture the characters perfectly. I love Angel-centric, back in time fics. Not many writers can do them well, but you really nailed it! I hope you consider writing another similar story soon. |
| val 2003-09-20 ch 12, anon. | abuseI loved this story. Your charactorization of Angel and Cordy was very insiteful. I love Angel verses Angelus, time travel stories, not many can do them well, but you aced it. Keep writing you are very good. |
| Phi 2003-02-07 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! It's been quite a while since I've sat down to a well-written Angel fic that flows as smoothly as 'A stich in time'. You really made the concept of time travel and the ripple effect come alive. I've read time travel fics before but they usually have mistakes concerning the ramifications of the timeline shift. I couldn't find a single one in your story. Thanks for writing such an enjoyable fic. ~ Phi |
| Imzadi 2003-02-03 ch 1, | abuseYes! A new Yahtzee story! Magnificent! For my money As Time Goes By is the best Buffy/Angel story ever, and Hoop Screams is the best comic Angel story. And of course Sea Change is absolutely magnificent. So I welcome this story, which is off to an auspicious beginning. Thank you. (Will we see any Lindsey? I do hope so) |
| BK the irregular 2003-02-02 ch 12, | abuseAmazing work! I got worried when a year went by and nothing appeared with the name "Rheanna" on it. But this ... this was worth the wait and more. With the despair, the humor, the inevitability ... this is marvelous stuff. I'm in awe. |
| Dorothy 2003-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is such a great story. I read through the whole thing in one sitting. I couldn't bear to stop and finish it some other time. I have never written a review before so this should show how much I liked this story. Can't wait to see what other adventures you might spring on us. |
| funvince 2003-02-01 ch 12, anon. | abuseI have always enjoyed reading your stories and this one is no exception. It's an extremly good Angel story and one of the best time travel ones I've ever read too. The characters were fleshed out and corresponded to their tv counterpart wells. I hope you continue to do more in the future. |
| Dannyblue 2003-01-31 ch 12, | abuseWhat a fantastic read! I read the entire story, both books, in one sitting, which I don't usually do. I usually read long fics like this over several days, with lots of breaks. But this one had me hooked from beginning to end. I loved your portrayal of the past. And depiction of the Angelus/Darla relationship seemed dead-on. I don't even have to talk about the Cordy/Angel friendship/but-definately-more relationship. Like "Splinter", this was excellent. You guys make a great team. |