Oh, this was lovely! I consider this as a nice peice, very well done, and I love, *love* the way you wrote PErcy's character. Very, very accurate. Some of the phrases you used in the first chapter were very... engaging, descriptive, particualrly the metaphors about people passing breifly through the light then fading into obscurity... wow. Shivers.

I think this story is great! It's sweet without being stifling. Too many people write stories that are sweet, but too perfect. As we all know life isn't perfect... Congrats on a great story. Keep up the great work. I'd like to know more about how the two are going to cope!

This is the first Oliver/Percy story I've ever seen, and I'll admit... I love it! It's so cute, and I think Percy is really in character, as is Oliver. I bet it's hard to write this since there's not many others to read? I hope not, so that you'll continue this! I really love it! I hope for the next chapter soon! ^_^

Wow! This is really good! I hope you write more soon. It's actually kind of a relief to read something non-OOtP-related. You've got an interesting interpretation of Percy going on here and you do an amazing job getting into his head and writing from his point of view. That whole conversation in chapter four was briliant! I've never been much for Percy/Oliver (though I've always been a rabid gay!Percy fan), but fics like this one are definately starting to convert me. Please continue.

C.c.

OOh! There IS more! Woo! You're wonderful, you know that, right?

I love this fic. I remember reading it, then not being able to find it again, and now I have and yay! Um... there's more, right?

I haven't read and Oliver/Percy in awhile, but this is great! I love how you make Percy so proper, and insecure-ish. And Oliver is so cute! Hehe. I love the fic, Percy doesn't seem OOC at all, and neither does Oliver. Great fic, and I love all your other stuff to, just to let you know.

Much Love and Gweeness,
Faun Fawn

Great Percy fic! I didn't like Percy much at first either but after reading a lot of fics about him and actually thinking how he would see things, I started to think of him as a very interesting character. You've just got to update this one...even though you seem to have a lot of other fics in the works, this one's still my favorite out of all of them. Please don't abandon the Percy fic! Okay, I realize I'm starting to sound pathetic here lol, but I just liked this story a lot. Ciao!

This is such a cute story.
you definitly deserve more reviews for it...hope you continue it soon...can't wait for more :)

A good story, lots of emotion and a very disturbed Percy. Angst! Yay. Slight downside in that there is an awful lot of americanisms in your story, but that's something we all have a problem with; you should see my attempts to lose my English-ness and become American. Look forward to more though xx

Oh my god.this is great! I'd never read any Percy/Oliver slash before and thought the idea was a bit odd. But I'd say this story got me hooked to the idea! I also like how Percy's written in this one- I read a bunch of Percy/Oliver stories after this one, but yours still sticks out in my mind as unique. I hope to see more soon!

Evil Witch. leaving it like that! : P Bwha. Write more. I'm loving this story all too much.

This is a great story! I love your writing style!

Oh, it's gettin' really good now. Heheh. Just kidding, ya know, 'cause it's always been good. No.great!

Right.getting back on subject, I hope your fingers are feeling better today. I think it's great that you're willing to risk some pain in order to get the next chappie out for your adoring public. And it really was quite worth it.

Wonderful work, yet again. P & O forever!

Aww.cuteness. :) Can't wait for the next part!