i like that story... maybe harry and peter can get together and it will change the future maybe he wont go to the dark side... and the potters wont be killed...

lol. i like this story and the plot so far- its pretty interesting and i dont think ive read one of these before. you write it well, and thats a plus

the only problem im having with your story is that when the characters have a though, the // sometimes get me confused and disoriented, but i'll live. XD

I've never seen a Harry/Peter ship before, it's very interesting. Can't wait untill you update!

~*Celia*~

well... I guess it's useless to expect you to continue this fic, isn't it? I know last time you updated was in 2003, but can you go on, please? I like this so far =D!! I also know that continuing a story after so long is difficult, it happens, but could you make just one attempt? thanks a lot!

yuck

Aww! This is soo cute! XD Its so weird because I don't really ship any of the pairings in this fic, but I enjoy it. I must secretly be Swedish.

Anyways... constructive criticism. I think you need a beta reader. You should always have one, even if you're super amazing professional or something. But your mistakes are just small spelling errors, some grammar. Nothing a beta reader couldn't catch. I'd suggest hunting one down (they're easy to find and capture, seeing as half of the fanfic readers/writers also do beta reading).

You must keep writing! I'll die! ...well, I'll be sad...

Please upadte soon11
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I can see you haven't updated in a while. But it's quite interesting to tell you the truth.

Oh Plez, I *beg* of you, please continue this! First, how "this became that" (To
quote Harry from chap 3)is starting to become
apparent, AND there's a number of NASTY cliffhangers too...

Sirius the sex god?*Snickers* I Never heard THAT before.

I realize I'm only up to chap. 2 at this point, but I snuck ahead to see if this story was finished or not. As it's not, I'm begging you to
finish this story! You weremn't kiddin' about the rare pairing, and if you'd just said who it was,I
might've ran for the hills. But I didn't and I'm
glad. Well written, gripping plot, good characterization, I would really like to see more of this one.

Peter and Harry?!? So wrong and yet oddly compelling, you've completely unbalanced me, well done. I'm not sure if I want you to continue or not, there just doesn't seem to be a way for this to end well. Good job though, I like your style and your odd pairing is disturbingly believable.

Ok, I have to admit I actually really liked this so far. I've never really liked Peter but I like him in your fic. I've read the later chapters at the PSA but I'm kinda disappointed that you've only gone to chapter 11. I'm really curious to see how Peter and Harry's relationship is going to progress and I hope you'll keep Sev and Remus together (cause I really like that pairing). Please update soon! I like well written timetravel fics and your fic is one of the better ones even if it's an unusual pairing.

omg you have to update soon its so...good poor peter i love peter i'm gonna cry now...hahha...
its really good and sad i hope you update soon
Love Traci