Excellent Story

Wow, Blaze, just... wow. The weaving in and out, the internal thoughts, the emotion. It all sort of floats around in this wonderul, angsty haze, and then at the end, when it all settles and you realize the pain of everything that's just happened, that's when it hits you -- this fic rules.

Oh. my. gosh. What an amazing, phenomenal story. What a fantastically written, deeply felt, superb story. I was touched and moved and just...absolutely undone by it. Jack and Sam are flawlessly characterized. Wow. Fantastic. You rock!!! Please keep writing!!!!

Wow, wow, wow. What an angsty, realistic story this is. You really draw the reader into your little world. I love the characterizations of Jack and Samantha. You really captured them well. I'm intrigued by their dynamic on the show and you manage to recreate it here. Great job1