Aw, cute. I think her paper could use a little bit of work but over all it was really sweet.

yay! love the shipperness and the hidden talents! keep it up :) i'll be waiting for the sequel! :)

aaww that was the sweetest chapter ever!! Im all warm inside now! How many women do you know of that would want to here those words from MV? I know I would!! i would completly melt if he said anything like that to me!

APPLAUSE!!! awesome job! :D :D :D :D

That was Perfect!! How cute how he let her see his drawings and Sydney letting him see her paper, that was soo sweet:)

Awsome story, I loved it:-)

*tear* so sweet...i like it a lot.

great chapter! i love her paper and how she wants to grab him by the collar and kiss him! love the end of the chapter- update soon! :):)

DON'T SHOOT! lol, great update! update another one soon! :D

Like, I know it is Vaughn, right? right? but still, I can't wait to see what's next. I love this Alias-ish cliffhanger-feeling ;)

nice cliffhanger! cant wait for more

great start! i love the writer's block and writing what you know. the heels are gerat too! update soon! i wanna know what happens! :)

i love fluff! :D i want to see where's she's going, update soon! :)

It sounds so good! I can't wait to read the rest of it!

very cute! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter and I can't wait to see where she goes, I think I know but who knows maybe you'll suprise me!

Yeaaah! Fluff! Fluff! I love Fluff! Go on, and update soon please :)