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qtgirl 2007-08-27 . chapter 2
That episode was All Hell breaks loose (the finale of season 3). Phoebe goes to the underworld to save Cole and while she's down there Prue and Piper are exposed as witches. The episode ends with Prue dying.
Wicked R 2005-09-16 . chapter 10
97 %? funny.
Wicked R 2005-09-16 . chapter 8
when it goes well, something has to ruin everything as you say, sure, that would be the spirit of the show as well. it's such a pity you don't write more nowadays anymore
Wicked R 2005-09-16 . chapter 6
you can certainly pruduce cliffhangers
Wicked R 2005-09-16 . chapter 3
love the name, ahahahaha.
Acacia Jules 2004-11-10 . chapter 4
um, about his not being liked in the underworld . . . . darling author, he's the former source of evil, Phoebe was his queen. He's adored, and feared by all. He's also the most powerful demon in existance now. It's why the Avatar's wanted him. That's why he's so invincable.

The reason Cole went insane, well, ya get rejected so many times by a woman you gave up everything for . . . and then her sister attempts yet ANOTHER vanquishing ON YOUR BIRTHDAY, a birthday which no one had even acknowledged . . . . well, it tends to drive a man to drink, and over the edge. In Cole's final year, Phoebe was really just CRUEL to him. He just wanted to start over, use his new powers to help save people, they just repeatedly rejected him and tried to vanquish him. (can you tell I'm not a fan of the direction the writers took that season?)
Tzarista 2003-09-12 . chapter 12
great story
randompalindrome 2003-03-23 . chapter 12
that is so sweet
Pam 2003-03-07 . chapter 12
That was a very nice story. Well done! and Thank you.
Barb6 2003-03-03 . chapter 12
I am a sucker for happy ending and stories where love conquers all and I got everything I wanted in this story! Thank you for a great story! Please keep writing Phoebe and Cole stories! I prefer to live in the world of fan fiction where this couple can be together and happy. Great story!
Miss Mazzy 2003-03-03 . chapter 12
aww they finally got there happy ending
I loved your story it is really good.
Evil Angel4 2003-03-03 . chapter 12
WELL WHAT CAN I SAY?
"She had never believed in happy endings, but she couldn't help feeling that right now was a close as you could possibly get." I think this sentence sums it all! I loved this story!
The fight scene was great, thank god Phoebe didn't hurt Cole's pride! I'm glad that some kind of friendship developped between leo & cole! and the scene where he asks Phoebe's hand was just so cute!
I can only hope you already have another story in mind ;-)
Cindy 2003-02-25 . chapter 11
I am enjoying this story but it seems again the only way Cole can be included in the Halliwell's lives is if he becomes "powerless", a condition that is not "natural" for him. He has to be less than he was destined to be.
Miss Mazzy 2003-02-25 . chapter 11
Aww Cole and Phoebe back together.
love your story it's great
cant wait for the next part
update soon
liz 2003-02-25 . chapter 11
hey love your story!
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