I loved it, amazing work) Sad but tooo cute... and then sad againP

This was amazingly well written, both in story and style. You must write for a living, and if not, you should get on that. Honestly, I would read anything you write. Great job.

*Joins in the applause*

*Applaudes enthusiasticaly*

Well done! I can sort of indentify with her, nice twist, and very good ending!

great story! it was nice to finally see an "arranged marriage" story that showed that even though the guy was great and would treat her gently and cherish her, an arranged marriage is an arranged marriage and maybe not wanted. this is the first story i've seen like this. Yes, it's sad, but it has another truth to it. The truth of wanting, as Eowyn said, to not be in a cage. Even if your companion in that cage with you was great.

oh how horribly sad! This is very good, though bitter. Not all stories should have a happy ending so this is refreshing.

NiRi

Oh that was just horrible! But brilliant!

oh...my...gosh... This was such a well written story! I really really enjoyed reading it. It would even be great if you continued it and made it into an actual story instead of just a one-shot. Just an idea.

Honestly though.. This was fantastic!

O...M...G! That was just super awsome! Wow My mouth was hanging open at the end that was just beuatiful! alrightwell you saved my day! love love love love this story ! you have a great writting mind!

I really love this story, so sad and touching. I think it is amazing to put so much emotion in such a short story. great work!

i like your prose. it's beautiful and yes, the twist is good.

Bravo! Encore! Please? You can do it! Don't hide your talent from the hungry reader! Lol. But, do whatever you want. You probabaly WON'T be writing more in this story, but I just want to let you know that it was great. So...Bravo!

SY

oh that is such a good story. I LOVE IT!

great story. short. really short. yet full of meaning and emotions. well done! by the way, are you going to have a sequel to "in wonderland"? i hope you are. well...most people hope so, i guess.

Well, my name doesn't really fit the story does it? To tell the truth, I find it an immensely touching story, full of sadness... Perhaps she could become happy...well, that is what I'll imagine... or not. This is a truly great story even without the "and they lived happily ever after". You create in the reader a feeling of such compassion and sadness... it's amazing. My only regret: that the end could not be happier.