Ohh, excellent - I love this part of FF VII, the whole dealing with Cloud's sordid past, it makes me giddy. (yeah...)

*chirp* *chirp*

Anyway, good job so far, you're not going to leave it here are you? Keep going!!

~Cheers!!~

Hey, this is really great so far. Zack is such a good guy for being a friend to Cloud. I love how he says "We're gonna be alright." Of course, as we all know, things don't end so happily.

Can't wait to read on.

~Cheers!!~

Oww.. as Zack is my favorite character, you certainly almost had me in tears there. Nice work.

Zack's death is one of the most most painful bits in the game for me. You really got the mood and sadness across here, especially with: "We're gonna be alright." *aw*... heartbreaking....