Very well written fic. I like how you drew the reader into the fic in the beginning. Keep up the good work.

Nice story. A few typo's and such now and then, but nothing devastating. Only thing I feel missing is a proper conclusion to the story. An epilogue would be in order, don't you think? :)

I too agree there should be more Nabiki/Ranma xovers.. And yes, changes in characters are always generally done, otherwise it wouldnt be fanfiction... Very good story.

I do like this story quite a BIT!

Now All that needs is a short final Epilogue where the untied loose ends are tied in Narima and 'Biki' and Ranma are doing what they do best!

Plus an appearence by a Guardian Angel (Akane) wouldn't be bd either. Yeah a bit clique, but still not a bad idea!

dennisud

This requires a sequel!

Cool. Good Story. Good characterization of Ranma and how he deals with his guilt. I also liked how Nabiki... well for lack of a better way of saying it, blossomed in the story into a much more (mentally) healthy person. Thanks for the good read.

Hated this fic for one simple reason, Ranma had done nothing he needed redemption for.

If it hadn't been for that factor, this would have been a good fic.

Yes, I did read the whole fic. I just tuned out what I hated about it.

The premise of Akane dies at Jusenkyo and Ranma is at fault or is blamed for it by others or himself is highly irritating. Ranma didn't cause Akane get into the situation, so if she dies from it, he's not to blame.

Saffron was a dangerous opponent, who Ranma barely beat, and the this points is one of the best for continuations where Akane has died since it's easiest ones to tweak for her death.

If you'd had Nabiki challenging Ranma as a way to keep himself from killing himself because his 'True Love' had died, it would have been fine.

But the idea of Ranma being at fault for Akane's death, and needing to atone is so much garbage.

Please update or I will cry.

"Stitch help you." Oh well, this was less weird than the last
time he had run into that Djinn in Antarctica. Hehehehe.

This is the rarest of all Ranma Fics, a completed one!
Loved it!

"Ya can't save lives sitt'n on your ass" choruses the group together.
*grin*

I like the way this chapter went.

demented grasshopper on crack
LOL. I like the description.

You do really nice work on
the emotional level of the
characters. Everything builds
up slowly rather then just
pops up full blown.

Damn good chapter. I just can't
see Ryoga blaming Ranma for
Akane's death tho'. Who else
could have taken out Saffron?
Then again Ryoga is really pig
headed hence the curse.

Ukyou took it better then
I thought she would. Still
was a hell of a scene tho'
I liked the morning scene
with Nabiki. I'm surprised
she acted like Akane tho'

Nabiki is incredibly ingenuous when she sets
her mind to it. I'm impressed with the
solutions she came up with.

shriveled human-on-a-stick
Doesn't that sound like a weird
food item from the pits?

Great ending.