well, I must say your first chapter got me hooked, these are the very things I think about when I read "Chobits" myself...I've noticed alot of these fan-fics only deal with Chii and Hedeki in the present, them falling in love, but what happens after? I really can't wait to finish reading your fic >^_^

Cool story you gotta keep writting!

Oh, its so wonderful! Plese write more, more, more!

Nice fan fic man

Need more more
Now!

This fic has promise. Keep it up!

As a dark vampire of the night i command you ot continue this wonderful piece of writing. even though i have only read the manga. this is very good CONTINUE!!

Congradulations!!! your great, your story is great and you must write more!!!