Yes yes! Another story!
Legolas is so cute, Thalion, and Thranduil are good to be so pertective of Legolas. Some abusive Thranduil stories go too in depth, or not enough, or BLECH! I like your though. It's very well written.

Wow... just wow. It wasn't deep which is why I can't really say much. I love it. "Hold on" by Good Charlotte (sp?) kept me going when stuff was happening, I hope Thalion can keep Legolas going. A little boy shouldn't be put through that.
Stupid Thranduil.

I really like this!Good job!

oh this was very well written! And do not let a few flames make you stop writing this! I want more of it!

Somebody was flaming you? *gasps* Why? This is good!

Wow! I have never ever seen a story like this end so happily. You're a genius.

I'm putting this in my favorites' right away.

NO! That' CAN'T be the end! I do believe I reviewed you for a story called "Little Greenleaf"...yes, that was it, and as you can probably guess I am very happy that Thranduil came to his senses after that unfortunate incident. *faints from relief*

And Thalion is such a good big brother. I must go and show Princess Amanalda, my elven sister this story now.

PLLEASE write more! You MUST! YOU MUST! Or else...*eyes narrow darkly and all lights in room go out as Melphie picks up flame-thrower*...I'll flame you. *grins like monster*

I love your story! It's really good! You should write a sequel or some more chapters!

.I know i reviewed the first chapter just a few minutes ago but i wanted to review the rest of the story too. This story is brilliant and don't let anyone tell you different, you are a really good writer. You go girl

This story is really cool, The song at the bottom really fits in with it

I have to say that, for starters, I've never seen the logic in abusive-Thranduil stories. Elves never struck me as angry drunks, more like giggly ones. I think, however, that your Thranduil is a little more justified than most. At least there is a *reason* for his actions, which means I won't sic my rabid attack muse on you. ;) I do like your writing style, and Thalion calling Legolas "little leaf" was extremely cute. For all Thalion was an original character and this was a fairly short story, you made quite real. That's not easy to do. I congratulate you on him. You are an excellent writer, but I rather liked your Elrond and Elros story better.

oh my god u have to carry on soon.
please u have to.
this is so sweet yet so sad.
i hope thranduil doesn't hit Legolas again

Once more, beautifully written! I don't find this at all offensive. How could anyone? The ending was so sweet! And Thalion was cool!! You are such a talanted writer! Hope to more stories from you soon!

Hey I've read some other father abuse stories about Legolas too, but this is really good. Legolas is really cute and I love the whole brotherly love thing! Keep the chapters coming!

Aw, look. It's another poor abused Legolas. And look! It's an Evil!Thranduil.

Change the record. It's been seen and done a thousand times, and it's so OOC it's just a random face with the name Thranduil on it.

Your writing is very good, shame the subject matter lets it down.