Okay, very good writing, but to put it lightly, Scarlett seems like Hawkeye's female parallel universe double. TOO MARY SUE-ISH! And a female surgeon wouldn't be able to fit in that quickly. Back then, the army was a bunch of sexist nincompoops and she would have to fight like hell to get to be a doctor.

uh...ive always thought that only males get hemophilia...
the females are the carriers...
good story, but im certain that Scarlett couldn't get hemophilia

I must admit I'd forgotten about this one - but it's good to know you hadn't. One thing I'm puzzled about though is how Scarlett became a haemophiliac. The allele (if in the right place on the chromosome) is usually masked by the dominant on the other X. It is extremely rare for women to get the disease. Ah whatever, no matter!

is this the end? plz continue the story! i luv it! =)

Love the story! Enough said. :D

Pretty good. it took u a while but i like it.

a wonderful story but please continue

this si a review for the entire story, ok? i am absolutley hooked. i love the addition of scarlett, and i love the fact that hawkeye and margaret both know her, it adds a lot to the plot. this is a great fic, please update it soon!

how incredibly and disturbingly Mary Sue. i liked the part where you mention the bad spelling and grammar. at least, i liked it after i had the bad spelling and grammar translated into actual english. use a spellchecker and a beta reader. better yet, stop writing. you're embarrassing yourself.

Hi its was a great story please make more chapters

please please please please more more more more!

I love stories that adress hawkeye in those last couple of episodes. please continue!

and add in sidney if you can, I think he's the greatest!

great job. characterazation and dialough are a crips and wonderful as ever. keep going!

YAY! You updated! :) Glad to see you got through your troubles with the GFA chapter (though you've still got the second part to do) Also glad to see ff.com is letting you post again. Stupid person that did that...
Anyway, this is an awesome story! Good job! ANd Margaret finally told Hawkeye about the baby, yay! I love Charles and Scarlett together. Speaking of Scarlett, you aren't planning to do something crazy like kill her off or something, are you? Are you? Yahh! You'd better not...
Anyway, get on the next chapter, savy? (ooh, who just went to see Pirates of the Carribean? I've been looking for an excuse to say that for days) Good luck writing the next part! Can't wait to read it!

It's great Lyss, I hope for more, and soon k?

you story is going wonderfully. please finish it.

Hey! This was good, sex scenes and all. Sex on the beach, heehee! You were telling me about this story the other day, and I hadn't read it yet, so I decided to and it is so good! I've always liked Charles, and I'm happy to see him find happiness with Scarlett. I really like Scarlett, she's cool. At first, I thought, with the way you were portraying Scarlett and BJ together, you were going to have BJ cheat on Peg, but that's not BJ's style. Some people change characters' ways for the sake of their stories, but you don't seem to do that.
I can't wait to see how Margaret tells Hawkeye she's pregnant. You were saying you were having trouble with the next chapter, so I wish you luck on that and I hope you'll be able to upload again really soon. You said you wanted reviews, so here you go!
-Andrea